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Backslasherton


Author of mildly successful B-List featured stories, freelance editor, and man of many expensive hobbies.

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This story is a sequel to The Girl I Left Behind Me


A soldier's death is always hard, especially for their loved ones. Now Celestia is facing one of the toughest moments in her life. Jackson wants her to move on and be happy, but how can she be happy after this. Then to make matters worse he suddenly appears before her, but he's dead... isn't he?

Featured 7/8/2014
Rewritten January 5th, 2018 - Present.

PLACED ON HOLD INDEFINITELY AS OF 11/30/2018
Placed on hold because of my inability to balance two stories at once. We'll see if anything changes, but I'll be focusing my efforts on Textbook Soldier.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 70 )

Love it that's all that needs t o be said

If only I could draw...

So much love to this story. Can't wait for more.

thats the name of a john wayne movie.

“Then where were you for the last month?” Celestia asked angrily.


“Why you? Why not send a whole squad?” Celestia asked, confused.

I can't help but feel something is missing here.

4661246 Fixed, as it turns out that was a rather important paragraph that got deleted somehow...

Good sequel to a great story, but I was still hoping for a ponified version of The Duke. :derpytongue2:

4661465 That's happened to me before. I'm still not sure how, though.

Comment posted by ocbaker deleted Jul 9th, 2014

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Fimfiction seems to do that from time to time. I don't know why, because it can be really annoying.

Congratulations on the feature, it was well earned.

Hm. Short, just like the prequel. Feels rushed, too. Not enough time for real emotions to develop.
Also. It's 'Appleloosa'. You can look it up in the wiki.

-Zeph

Wow what a twist!

Like the title. Very Armyish :pinkiehappy:

Sounds interesting. My personal favorite stories are anthro, especially anthro harem. But I do ocasionally find a normal pony story i can enjoy. On a side note, did you get the name from John Waynes movie "She wore a yellow ribbon"?

4688451 To be honest, I actually got the names for both stories from the original songs. She Wore A Yellow Ribbon is actually a famous march from the US Army, and The Girl I Left Behind Me is an old departure song also used by multiple different military groups.

And in that town, her daddy kept a shotgun.

He kept it in the springtime in the early month of May.

And if you asked him why the hell he kept it?

He kept it to blow that young marine's ass away.

4750947 I've heard many versions of this song, but that was is probably my favorite.

Human and Alicorn love, :pinkiesad2: what could be better?

4820813 That's a pretty tough choice ya'll go there.

4821300 huh well darn then i want both

Wait three years have passed since he faked his death or...?

4825527 He's been in Equestria for three years.

4845244 THANKS, MAN. I WORKED SUPER HARD ON IT.

4845244 I just realized you were referring to the one I put in the author's notes, and not making a joke about my cover-art. Whoops.

Hey awsome story when should the next part be out

5107271 Hopefully before the end of the year, but I can't promise. School has been really difficult and I'm not sure with this next part. Hopefully soon, though. Thanks for the compliment, though.

I love it! Please continue.

Enjoyed this, but I wouldn't mind a faster update speed.

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Yeah, Sorry about that. I was trying to figure out how to advance, and I just forgot about it.

Hmm, who would have died in two years if they succeeded? Luna? Celestia? Both? Because I'm pretty sure they don't know of her return location.

5649049 I figured that the terrorist were also weird cult people and they had predicted the coming of Nightmare Moon and the elements. So they worshiped Nightmare Moon and thought they could kill Celestia and the Elements to allow Nightmare to reign and stuff. Something like that. Or they just wanted to assassinate the Princess. Either way, it's really just a pick your own outcome kind of deal.

this isn't fun anymore :raritycry:

Why is there a picture of Luna when she is not in story?

6171057 If you're referring to the character tags, I fixed that. In any case, I was going to have this be a long story where they got to the Summer Sun Celebration. I ended up not doing that, but it was the original plan.

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