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What does a Princess do when she is immortal, ruler of a kingdom and utterly alone? When there is no one to call your own or friend to turn to. This is the problem facing Princess Celestia. She has no real friends except her younger sister Luna. When that isn't enough, one event will change her life forever. Come join Celestia as she finds what she is longing for in the most unlikely of places.
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Can't wait to see more of this
D'aaaaaw
"No pony is an Island" I see what you did there haha
How does romance work in this story? Are you going to skip 12 years soon?
Just explain a bit about what happened in that timeframe and all should be good.
Looks like an entertaining story so i'll keep watch on this.
I'll admit I came into this with low expectations. From the description, title, and author's profile picture, I was prepared for a "brony is transported to Equestria, becomes their alicorn OC, and instantly ships with Celestia."
I'm not going to make those kinds of assumptions again. Have some 'staches.
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Your have so right.
So much D'aaaaawwwww
Why was I expecting an adventure time crossover...
Not a bad start, but you should space your paragraphs out a little more. It just makes things a little easier for the reader to follow.
this looks promising.
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i't earned a follow
Gotta se more of this. This is great overall.
Thank you all so much. I actually have chapters 2 and 3. I just have to run them through my editor. She has been really helpful with this project. For those wondering if more will happen the answer is "yes." You can not have romance with a 7 year old. I love all the input and please keep it coming. Thanks once again for the taking the time to read.
P.S. If anyone can tell me where I can get a cool pony pic that would be great. The current icon is a first attempt. I was hoping for better. Would even be willing to contract an artist.
Well DiCaprio said it best
The idea of the mirror being the way to talk to each other reminds me of a Doctor Who episode, therefor i already like it. Much like everybody else i want MOAR!!
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goddamn. i was expecting a typical "brony plops into equestria and fucks celestia silly" from the description but this is actually quite adorable.
followin'
Well, that was not what I feared it would be. I very much like the premise. Having said that, I do have some thoughts/suggestions.
It would be helpful to indent every new paragraph or at least leave an empty line between them.
The dialogue falls a little short; all the characters sound just about the same. In many cases, and certainly when dealing with Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, and a 7-year-old boy, you should usually be able to tell who's talking without even having "so-and-so said."
Also, you keep switching from present tense to past tense and back again. I would suggest picking one and sticking to it throughout.
It's definitely a good start, so keep writing!
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all I have to say to his adorableness is
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DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW
Hey every Brony. Thanks for all the input. I've learned a few new things. First, the story looks great on my lap top but copy and paste and the format gets screwy, sorry bout that. Second this is really fun. I'm still writing as we speak. Chapter 4 is with my editor now. For any Brony who finds errors I do apologize as between myself and the editor we try to catch them all. I will try to keep it in past tense if possible though I do slip up. I hope you guys are enjoying this tail as much as I am writing it. So in closing keep the comments coming and Thank you once again.
Oooh this is getting good
Wow you update fast. I really hope he doesn't turn into a pony though.
cant wait for next chapter. in my opinion it could "COULD" be drawn out a little longer (I don't know how but it could be done) to make it even more enjoyable but other than that I fucking love this and the last chapter.
He isn't becoming a pony, is he?
Can I have Moar please?
I don't understand the comments people make regarding him being a pony.
I think you set up the circumstances quite well for this conversion. Yes, it was a little fast, but it flowed quite nicely.
The only problem I have with Human becoming pony, is when it just happens out of the blue. Human goes into portal, comes out Pony, and never explained why. That I can't stand.
As long as the explanation and lead-in are sound, I like it.
the feels! so powerful.mantenere il buon lavoro.
This is getting very interesting^^
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Not very excited abut the whole changing into a human thing, but I will see where this goes for now.
I should have seen this coming once you wrote that she will be a human for her time on Earth. Of course he is going to become a pony. How very cliché. So much for a cute interspecies romance.
I hope he doesn't become a pony, I get uncomfortable reading a human turned into a pony in a HUMAN in Equestria. It takes away the whole 'human being in Equastria' to me, It makes me feel like Im just reading an OC pony story.
Okay. This story has held onto my feels and has kept me on edge to see more. I love these kind of romantic like stories. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Man if this turns out with him turning in to a pony i will be utterly disapoint
So he becomes the alicorn in ur profile picture.
He will most likely get immortality considering the background decor you put up when he was being 'rebuild'
My mind cannot suppress these excessive amounts of cuteness! The adorability is too much!
DO NOT MAKE HIM A PONY!! A LOT MORE PEOPLE THAN JUST ME WILL HATE YOU FOREVER!!
Sorry for that outburst. This is your story and you should be able to do what you want with it. To be honest, that comment was a joke, I just think it would be better if he wasn't a pony, but that's my opinion.
Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I'd like to give a big shout out to RobertBel98! He is the artist who came up with the cover art for this story. Thanks amigo! Almost finished with chapter 4. Till then stay frosty all.
2371764 De nada senor. Glad you liked it!
All in all, this was a beautiful story.
It had some of the best heart-felt moments in it. For me, it was the ending.
You deserve these:
Short but sweet.
I said it once I will say it again, DAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
I loved this story so much. It always fascinates me to see how people can interpret a character from any series, especially when it takes a romantic turn. It just fills me with so much "DAW"
There are no words to describe how amazing of an ending that was
That was a great story, but I hate how short it was. Please make a sequel!
Sorry. Ponification ruined the story.
For every question, it could be another Chapter^^
More plz