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Terrence found himself lost in a sea of solitude while living his dream. Until a chance opportunity forces itself upon him. Now he finds himself in Equestria, where the horses and ponies he grew up raising are now sentient and find him to be... rather odd. Except one. And she finds him to be her one chance at happiness.
Author: This is my first fic EVER, so yeah.
Props go to tallestbrony, he helped me through all this.
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A promising start. I'll keep my eye on this
Hmm. I am beginning to see a trend with most Applejack pairings. They are either with soilders, or with afrm hands that come from the southern area of America.
Anyway, I will be looking forawrd to reading more.
2224797 HAH! Shows what YOU know! It ain't an ApplejackXAnon pairing!
2223838 and thank you, means a lot.
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Hmm. Well then is this is one of those rare human/Celestia pairings then why is Applejack the first character tag, or even a tag at all? Usually the first tag is the most important cannon character, so for me to think that this is an AJ pairing is understandable. If anything you are being misleading.
Either way, still looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Iq already like -where this is going. I'm looking forward to the next chapter:
i'm willing to give it a chance
daawww
2224969 thanks for pointing that out, and fixed. sorry for jumping down your throat too, new story jitters were getting me. mah bad.
Came out just in time. nice chapter
I really really really hope for human x Celestia ship oh please please please let it be.
Also very great chapter comrade. Now on to the next one.
2290535 Maaayyyyybeeeeeeee....
2290630
YESH!
I knew it was a great idea to look into this.
My feels.
2291492 Objective complete.
pretty sure he and mac will get along
Right in the feels bro. Good job.
Brony on!
It's good, keep it up
Celestiaxhuman their kinda rare fics same with rarityxhuman and pinkiepiexhuman im trying to make more of the latter fics
I can point you to some good human/Celestia romance stories, if you are interested.
Anyway, this was a good chapter. But please for the love of God, do not to the whole "human becomes a vegetarian instantly" think. Humans need meat to stay healthy. Humans need the protein from meat to stay healthy. Unless you want your character to eat beans, nuts, and bugs to supplement that please do not make him an instant vegetarian.
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I believe I only know one other humanXCelestia story besides this one. But yea, you're completely right about the whole instant vegetarian subject. Adjustments woud have to be made over time and all.
I must say that I am liking what's going on so far. This is something that I am sure to keep my eyes opening for.
Hope you don't mind, but I like to post C&Cs to help out those that I can, at least to the best of my abilities...so, here goes:
Celestia had walked out onto her's and was starting at the sun.
> I think you mean to go with ‘staring’.
He face, which had been turning happy, froze.
> Correction: ‘His’.
Heh heh, that Granny Smith, trying to play match-maker. Oh boy, heh. Like I mention in the previous chapter, I am rather interested so far with the story, so I'll keep my eyes out for you.
C&Cs:
"are stronger than ya think."
> Capitalize ‘are’.
Terrance caught BigMac's eye and smiled.
> Separate “BigMac’s”.
She was, for all intents and purposes, and talking, winged, horned HORSE.
> Replace the last ‘and’ with ‘a’.
2322040 FIXED!
2321594 no no i gotcha, I gotcha. Trust me that'll come up later.
2321594 it's funny, i actually have NO LOVE for the Sun Princess personally, it's just that I got a REALLY good idea for such a pairing and HAD to put it on paper- erm, i mean the internet. IMO, Luna is best pony princess.
2321594 yeah, fish should be good for eating since fluttershy feeds her animals that and fish can't think
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Cool, does that means that the next chapter will come up soon? Or maybe you soon will post a story where Luna meets a human?
P.S: If you run out of ideas, don't be ashamed of asking I bet, all of us that are follow this story will gladly let a hand
2391821 actually, there will be no LunaxAnon story. But I am writing something after CaA. It has nothing to do with Terrance-verse. But I'm hoping you guys will still like it.
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Of course, and that or the next chapter will come up soon? I'm curious about what will be Terrans next move, and if he ever going to get a pet? Winnona since to like him…must be the fingers and the ear scratching
2393516 im almost done with the 4th chapter, so it should be up tomorrow or the day after that. And i dunno about a pet... How about a Pet Sun Princess?
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A pet Sun Princess? What is that? Like Philomina now will start to land on him, very frequently and start nuzzle against his cheek?
Uy…did he is going to get a black fame phoenix?! Is that what you are talking about?!
2393864 >.> seriously? SUN PRINCESS... she also happens to be an alicorn... alabaster white... one of the royal pony sisters... RAISES THE SUN... NOW does that ring any bells?
Poor guy, he still feeling conflicted about her being an equine (even if the ponies and horses there are more sentient and less instinctual than the 'animal' version here). And, Celestia (among with the rest of them) is going to feel somewhat silly, when she find out that he wasn't in his right mind when he said that. But, on a more serious note, I wonder what is wrong with the poor man...
C&C:
"Of course, sister. No go enjoy yourself."
> Correction: ‘Now’.
Drink + Fever + Standing Conflict = Saying Stupid Shit
2399749 thank you! fixed!
Poor Terrance, when all seems well, things start going down hill.
No, no, no!
Why?
He turns into a pony, and I'm gone.
Reminds me of a time when I ran a 105 degree fever and started cussing out everything single thing I came into contact with. Sickness can make you do some crazy shit.
2402799 no i don't pull stuff like that. Look at previous comments, maybe you can catch where I'm going with this.
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Yea.. pony x human is tricky... so far you're doing ok.
2403974 Sorry. It's just, the past 5 fics I've read have come up with some pretty bullshitty ways of doing that to me. One story just went "You're human? Ohp, nope. You now pony. Bitch." It's just been aggravating.
If horse is a rasist slur or whatever in this universe it would be kinda helarious to have a three year old come here and not really knowing the difference yet call them horsies adorabley
2404916 I can see it now: "Horsies!"
+Rarity faints
+Pinkie's hair deflates
+Fluttershy cries
+AJ and Rainbow get defensive
+Twilight gets uncomfortable
+3 year old reads the atmosphere, starts crying
+EVERYONE FEELS BAD
aaaaand SCENE!
Yes just fucking yes manly tears are being shed.
About time....Just kidding.
A nice chapter indeed.
This chapter reminded me a little bit of Hachi.
2548763 If only I knew what Hachi was...
YAR! Good chapter is good.
Brony on!