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Jake started this long journey when he was a boy meeting Princess Celestia for the first time. Growing up with her they became fast friends and eventually fell in love. That was put to the test when he gave his life defending when she visited Earth. "The Tale of Princess Celesta and Jake"

In "The Adventures of Jake in Equestria", he worked to master his new found skills in flight and magic. All the while making new friends and exploring his new home.

Now he faces his greatest challenge yet. Celestia and Luna have collasped and Jake must find what has caused this to his new family. Will he be able to cure the two sisters? Is there a cure to what is causing this and will Jake be able to discover it? Come along with our hero as he goes on a quest to save the ones he loves.

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Comments ( 20 )

“I bring company here and you’re being rude. Besides, you wanted to make an illegal move in that game!”
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Anywho: Glad to see this up already!

Comment posted by Arez deleted Jun 24th, 2014

4595329 Thanks for catching that. No matter how hard you look, you always miss something. Thanks fo the lookout.

:rainbowkiss: my gosh! Wow. I uh...... LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up Id love to see where your going with this. Keep it up!

Really good story so far. I really like how you have Excalibur and Jake interacting :)

QUEST TIME NEEDS EPIC TRAVELING MUSIC!!!!!!!!

4676611 Ah Yeah the music of Fairy Tale! Awesome choice bro! Thanks :rainbowdetermined2:

wow this is getting good not saying it wasn't good before this is amazing. looking forward to the next chapter, in fact this is so good i need to boop your nose i492.photobucket.com/albums/rr289/axlthehedgehog_2008/responses/boop.gif



stay classy:moustache:

Wait is this a herd tale?

7749622 Not sure yet. It does seem to be going in that direction but I really can't say. What I can say is that writer's block in a real pain.

Well where is he going like where is his first location and his final destination

7750866 Well that is the rub. I got writer's block and it has been a bit. I'm trying to get back into this. I wanted Jake to go over the map with Twilight and the gang who seem determined to go with him. His final destination is to find the Source of all magic. It/he/she/they are the only power that is strong enough to fix what has happened to Jake and what is currently killing Celestia and Luna. However this is not as simple as a road trip. Something else also hungers for the Source. A darkness that I can not describe and thus my block. I am open to suggestions. lol

Fear not though as I do plan on finishing this story. Thanks for reading the other two so far.

7750963 hmm can it be a past enemy perhap like tirek or sombra or the nightare cult or a combo of them

7750984 night cult? The time line in this case would be around nightmare night during season2.

7753634 they could have emerged at that time remember twilight was a unicorn during her adoption of nyx

Just expressing interest and wondering if this will be finished?

Please do more

Seems like despite his best efforts the story is dead truthfully if the last chapter of the last story was pasted over here and I realized that the last story has been unfinished since 2014 I would’ve been pleased with the costume party being the end of the series

“Well isn’t it obvious? I was Merlin the wizard of course. Anyways, Arthur and I set about putting together a kingdom of justice and we called it Camelot. Yes I know, not very original but I stuck with what I knew for the beginning.”

If that’s the case then that means he could be associated with Etrigan and the Justice League.

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