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NightInk


Just a writer trying to do good works. Please feel free to constructively criticize my work.

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After the battle with Nightmare Moon, the as yet unnamed hero has married his pony love. But when Celestia visits with a seemingly simple request, thing begin to go badly. Very badly. A sequel to "Embracing The Night.

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Comments ( 33 )

MOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAARRR(opera singing)

Hmm... Sequel huh?
Excellent.
Grazie amico mio.

After you're done can you do a prolog about how Adam and Luna got married?

1717869 Like a brief story about the wedding itself and what obstacles in their personal lives and worlds they may have had to overcome?

1737698 Yeah, sounds fun. It'd be with a lot less action, if any. It would probably be a talking, emotional, more romantic kind of thing, but yeah! Thanks, that's my next project! :pinkiehappy:

cant wait to see what will happen next :twilightsmile:

I think Legba is going to be my favorite character

This story doesn't have anywhere near enough comments. By the way, does Adam being the Lord of Chaos actually mean anything?

2201423 Uuuh, no. No it does not. :applejackunsure:

TURTLES!!!!!!! anyways nice thing you got going on i love this story mike......you only love this story because im in it so is that a problem luna? yes its kinda creepy ok ill stop reading fics like this thin thank you mike you welcome

I KNOW A CHARACTER WHO DOESN'T GIVE HALF A SHIT!

2397868 or ya know... wait. ughh his comment is so Ahh! BRAIN.EXE has crashed

2397884 "Therapist.exe starting" "Therapist.exe has become unresponsive." "Sanity levels low" "News.exe starting up."

'Man's head explodes from frustracion"

Dude fuck yeah Alaska, I lived in Juneau and I loved it there. And now I'll live in Texas in 2 days. Fuck

2820969 Haha I've heard Juneau is nice. Fairbanks is where it's at, though! I love the -40 winters! :pinkiehappy:

There is actually a song taught to kids to explain the John Henry story.

Well, I was going to tear into you about the first story in this trilogy being the only good one, but you turned it around. I also prefer this method of reforming Discord rather than the simple "let's be nice to the lord of chaos and he won't be as bad" that the show used.

Is there gonna be a sequel?

“Yeah. We need to go though, Luna. Celestia is ok here, and Nightmare Moon is a good pony mowShe won’t cause any harm.”

I knew it I knew it I knew he was star swirl the bearded

If this lake is anything like the river Styx, then he's in trouble

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