The origins of Spike's birth has always been a mystery, and although he is content with his life, forces out of control have other plans for the baby dragon. The Mane 6 must aid Spike in figuring out who he really is.
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Well... interesting ending. Twilight and Dashie seem to be getting shipped here. I'm hoping Rarity and Spike as well.
I'll take sad over a tragedy tag any day.
From a writing stand point you did each perspective quite well. Twilight used big intellectual words, Dash was rambunctious and fast, Fluttershy was calm and shy, and Spike was sarcastic, deep, and humorous. Very promising.
Graceful as an elephant on stilts? Have to write that one down...
Definitely left me wondering where this is going though... Rainbow's behavior and whether Spike is just dreaming or not... probably not...
Hey guys. Feedback on what I'm doing right, what I'm doing wrong and recommended fixes for what I'm doing wrong would be muchly appreciated =)
It looks good so far
I can't wait to see where you take this.
Spike vs. big Spike higlander style. heres to hoping
Spike seems to be seeing through and into someone else's eyes and mind respectively, very cool Honestly this is probably the best new fic I'v read all week.
Feedback and criticism is encouraged :3
Spike's gonna become a king :D
Aw snap!
841975 Thank you
another great chapter sazura! and a great way to end it too!
842616 and thank you for enjoying it
Why must you torture us whith deze cliff hangers?! Why?!
843463 Because I'm a terrible person
843537 you sick bastard!
“Oh don’t use that cliché way of speaking, Tia. Makes me feel like somepony is about fulfil a long lost destiny or something,” Luna retorted.
A truly great line
Awesome chapter man. Spike seems to have been dragon napped, dun, dun, dun! Rarity will not take this well. Somebody's gonna find out just how dangerous an enraged fashionista with magical powers can be.
846020 Fighting's not really my thing, I'm more into fashion.
847407 "But I'll rip you to pieces if you touch one scale on his cute little head!"
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And the plot finally gets started after faffing around for 4 chapters. Special thanks to FlimFlambros for bothering to proofread a bit =P
Criticism and feedback is appreciated
still fantastic the second time around! i am very interested in how you will depict the dragons in this story! i am too also getting into the realm of dragons with my own fic. its a shame that more authors dont tackle this.....
OH WELL!!! MORE FOR US
865044>>864982 Dragons for everyone! Seriously, what are the chances all of our fics get to the dragons at the same time? It be crazy mon.
Excellent as always. And I'm so exited, I just can't hide it. *dance like Twilight*
I like how the leader of the the dragons is a bit brash but the other two show more control. It gives the party a nice foil feeling that keeps it rounded. It's also nice to see the leader doesn't just ignore his companions. He considers their stands before acting, and while the final decision is up to him, he shows a good leadership trait in holding his allies opinions in interest.
Also I'm just gonna go out on a limb and guess griffons for perpetrators.
Where's Peewee?
Apologies for the late release and shortness of this chapter. The steam summer sale distracted me >.>
As usual, feedback and criticism is super happy fun times.
I detect a Lord of the Rings reference! Also, good story :D
Rarity doesn't fail to the see irony in it all.
Dash so bold. O- oh, my.
I'm gonna say our unknown Unicorn is Trixie. Usually I would suspect Luna, but with as much as Luna's been talking lately, I think Twi would be quick to recognize her voice.
I like how calm Spike is being and how he's gathering information.
a dragon killing cult lead by a dragon?
way to unknwowingly steal my ideas
lol great chapter
917530 Sorry
we can share
917006 Wait what irony? Tell meeeeee.
918497 Ignore Flim, I do
Also, the idea of her rescuing him when he dreams of rescuing her and being her knight in shining armor. By the way, if this doesn't fulfill my need for Sparity, I may bludgeon you with a stick
918546 ...Duly noted sir...
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918546>>918553 I WILL NOT BE IGNORED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol and don't worry about the dragon cult thing.
still love this story!
918642 You and your cults.
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Lets make a wager, you say spike has some type of clairvoyance, and I say thats some type of separate part of spike who is doing this, everytime he sleeps, it comes out of him.
934432 Have you read the latest chapter?
934939 I know. I am so winning his wager.
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Wonder what I win? Oh well...
Very good so far over all, the only thing i noticed were quite a few but subtle, spelling mistakes and a few punctuation mistakes. Other than that, the personalities of the characters are well done, a good amount of description, and solid story telling.
938406 Thanks for the feedback =) Were there any parts you felt were a bit too long-winded or could have been omitted?
Very good overall, with spelling mistakes throughout the story, but very subtle ones rather than engrish. A good amount of description and storytelling. Looking forward to seeing more, and if you'd like, i could be your editor and go in and fix all that stuff. If you wanna talk more about it, add me on skype(skype name is Sonofbelz). It's up to you bro.
938530 That would actually be great, haha. Buut, I don't use skype
938600 Well shit, that would've made it easier
. Oh well, just PM me what you want me to do.
Criticism and feedback is yum.
I knew when I was stareing at people trying to make their heads explode, I was really in a magic battle with them! Or wait, was that about getting a taco tusday...
So many interesting things: mystery unicorn, tomb of the Dragon King, and Kobalt. Can't wait till the next part.
ah, the twidash shipping. I'm more of a lunaxeverypony kind of guy, but this is still good. hope to see Spike go all prison break on them (never watched the show, so I'm assuming that there will be plenty of shivs and explosions, and I know who the unicorn is, it is quite obviously Bon-Bon
Hey guys. Back from a bit of a break from writing. Should be able to update a bit more often, though I don't know if it's going to be on a set schedule. Hopefully at least one chapter every fortnight, though. As always, constructive criticism is great
I now wonder if Spike is going to be shipped with anyone... Granted I am not that much of a Sparity fan, but such are differing opinions. Anyway, best wishes and I hope to see what happens next!
1336918 Thank you