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[Bittersweet]
Dear Luna,
I was your hero.
And I failed you.
Is that why you haunt me?
Princess Celestia, after hundreds of years since Nightmare Moon was exiled, writes a letter to Princess Luna, in hopes of getting though to her, in bringing her little sister home. But it's rather hard to send a letter to the moon…
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sad and sweet. love it, even if short.
I see its in rage reviews...ill let someone else take it.
I don't think there is a reason to beat you to death, as you colourfully put it in your AU.
This was a good story. It was nice and sweet and it was a good length.
Accept my favourite and like.
A very personal, natural story. Celestia's words feel very organic, avoiding the horrible pitfall of being overly dramatic or forced. It flows well, and is easy to read.
I do sense a bit of personal sadness in here, almost as if you're writing to cope with something you yourself endured. I could be projecting, as I was involved in an attempted suicide, albeit in, erm, Luna's position.
Nevertheless, this is a lovely story with some undertones conveying suicide. Thought-provoking material and impactful.
This is one of the best stories I read in a long time.
I wish I could write like this.
Just imagining Celestia crying like that makes me sad, and most sad stories don't even make me feel like that.
Very good job, my friend.
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I'm... just going to let StarRunner respond to this...
*Hug*
No dislikes yet...
Hell to the yes
4654028 It was a couple years ago, and I know better now. I look back on it as the most beautiful night of my life for a lot of reasons, like how much my friends fought for me. It's not sad to me anymore.
aaaand, you made me wanna hug Celestia again^^ Congraz, that hasnt happened in a while^^
nice little stoty^^
So bittersweet. You hit me with da feels. Why??
I don't know if you are aware, but your story is in the popular section!
Nice job!
A lovely story. So glad I read it. Thanks muchly for writing it :)
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thank you for letting me know, and faving it too!
Really? Awesome!
Awww. So sad...
I won’t verbally kill you don’t worry 😂🤣 I just want to ask if you have accepted Jesus Christ into your heart as Lord and Savior? If you have, great😁 but if not He died for our sins and rose from the dead on the third day so we can go to heaven 🎉🎊 He is the Son of (and in Himself) God. No matter who you are or what you’ve done, you can ask for Him into your heart and for His forgiveness once and for all. The best part is you don’t have to go anywhere special to do so! Don’t delay He loves you more than you could ever know!