I'm a girl living in Ashley, New Milton. Loved mlp ever since it started showing and got to learn about these fanfic in October 2013. (Also I have dyslexia, so if I make mistakes sorry)
For a long time two families of Equestria's best fliers, the Shadowbolts and the Wonderbolts have been fighting to show who was better in the sky.
On Rainbow Dash's 20th birthday, she meets a boy, not knowing he was Soarin from the Wonderbolts, and they fall instantly in love.
Soon their family's find out and they're not too happy.....
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I think his name is actually spelt Soarin
Thanks
don't know how that happened since I got it right twice before
(poor little rich filly and stallion with a question)
Hm... It's good. But, you really need to work on your grammar. And make a little bigger plot. Other than that, it's great!
And then they both commit suicide! The end!
BEAST!!!
Okay. This screams Romeo and Juliet, and I love it. I want the next chapter soon. Great job with the first chapter. Congratulation with 10 stories.
blaaaaaaaaaa hurry with the second chapter so far its epic!!
Spoon, awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry I meant:
Soooooo, Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rainbow's cousin. Why not thunderlane? How to stop the feud, I say have the princesses stop it. Soarin and Rainbow's love inspires Cadence to show her aunt's how stupid there feud it and how it has hurt their subjects.
4485958 Thanks for the name and idea
I might use it, I think it will be on the parents instead though (Going to leave the elder princesses out of this)
So... That escalated quickly, I thought this would be the romance build up.
How about Skye Storm. And how's this:
The Princesses realize how stupid the fighting is and they make up.
to all who want to place the princesses in here:
I don't want the elder princesses (Luna and/or Celestia) in here the ones leading them are the captains.
might place Cadence, but not Luna or Celestia
I'm getting loads of ideas for Juliet's cousins name but now I need to work out....
Should they be a boy or a girl?
Perhaps if Romeo and Juliet die, their families will finally see how dumb their feuding is? Just a suggestion
Great job with these chapters. I say next step is for them to spend some time on dates. Maybe having a race between the two. They could go to sugar cube corner for a surprised. Maybe Spitfire and Fluttershy become good friends. I don't know. Good luck with the next chapter.
thank you for using the name I menchined.
I really love your story.
loooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeee iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
quick Q: Is this going to be like Gnomeo and Juliet were everyone thinks they die
but they really don't. or like Romeo and Juliet.
4495900 I'm going to go as much as I can to Shakespeare's one, (hence Pinkie's rundown in chap 3) but:
I'm kicking out Paris (Juliet's betrothed) and hopefully ease up on the deaths.
This calls for a pretend fight for the two, in a sense for the race to happen without any pony seeing the love affair.
Don't kill anyone or you will die
4497186 take it you like rainbow and soarin then?
Yes.
love it just don't kill soarin or dash like I said before please.
4500568 Ignore her. KILL THEM!!! GIVE THEM THE MOST GRUESOME DEATH EVER!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hehehe, I have problems. 
4501349 err... ok not I'm not saying i will...
But if I did how should I?
4501411 I don't know. Soarin cuts off his wings and jumps off of Cloudsdale onto the ground, and Rainbow Dash throws herself at a Timber Wolf or a Manticore and gets eaten alive!? Hehehe, I am so stupid. Kms.
Anyways, I know that isn't close to how they die in Romeo and Juliet, but I mean, in my version they die pretty horribly, and that's cool imo.
The Romeo-Juliet Story, just Skip the Killing off Either Character, the "Death" of both leads only work in Theatrical settings where you hear their voice and tone to perfectly portray it all.
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Can't wait till the next chapter.:)
4505285 You really like this don't ya
Yep!
Oh boy. That was too far. THis is giong to cause a war. And I mean a fight now.
Speechless. All I can say is awesome!
This is sounding like Romeo and Juliet! Can't wait for more!
Yeah. Nice job with this chapter. Hopefully some more friendships can end this feud.
4523143 Well that is the idea
But thanks
Nice short chapter!
Great start so far! I can't wait to keep reading!
Pinkie's run down of Romeo and Juliet was pretty enjoyable!
I enjoyed Pinkie's run down of Romeo and Juliet!
Cute chapter!
Don't worry, I still love the story!
Wow....
......I honestly did not see that ending coming. I'm not exactly super familiar with Romeo and Juliet so I'm not actually sure if this is what happened in the original. All I can say is great job! I liked how you included the Apple Family too!
I'm still loving this story!
4581134 thanks I'll change that
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