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Ugly-Duckling123


I'm a girl living in Ashley, New Milton. Loved mlp ever since it started showing and got to learn about these fanfic in October 2013. (Also I have dyslexia, so if I make mistakes sorry)

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After hearing The Tale of the Two Sisters from Sunset Shimmer, Si-Twi writes to Princess Twilight to ask Princess Luna about if she had the same kinds of nightmares and if of when they will stop?

(Story thought up by seeing the first Sneak Peek of the newest Equestria Girls Movie) - HERE

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Not gonna lie, this chapter has a really awesome concept lol

Bit of a nitpick - Principal, not Principle.

and piece reigned

peace

Vice-Principle

Principal

This was a nice idea, but the stick business is more appropriate for baboons than modern teenage girls. Using song lyrics for the final speech was also unfortunate; I wanted to read something more original to you.

7517979 Sorry, i just had to put 'My Past Is Not Today' in here somewhere :twilightblush:

Saw the Lion King reference coming a mile away. *still gives like*

It's Sci-Twi. As in "Science Twilight".

This was a very good short story.

'Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there were two regal sisters that ruled together and bring harmony throughout the land.' Sunset began hardly looking at the book, as if she knew this story off my heart, instead looking to Twilight.

Brought*

With that Sunset quickly picked up a stick and whacked Twilight around the back of the head with it, despite the cries from the other girls.

"Ow gees! What was that for?!" Twilight said rubbing the spot in question.

"It doesn't matter... It's in the past..." Sunset said smiling, the stick still in her hand.

"I'm sure that still would have hurt darling," Rarity said speaking the others thoughts.

"Well yeah it and the past can hurt," Sunset said comforting Twilight slightly "But as Princess Twilight said - You can either run from it, or learn from it..." suddenly Sunset swung the stick around aiming for everyone's heads but they all ducked to avoid it. "See?"

I know where you got that from.

Very "there are two wolves inside you." I like it!

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