In another reality, Luna was never sent to the moon instead she created a group of pegasi whose job is to make ponies appreciate the night.
Now many years later Rainbow Dash and her friend Soarin dream to be on the Wonderbolts until something comes up that would turn their worlds upside down.
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Nice story to begin with. I can' wait to see how this story progresses. I wonder how much time will pass before those two will see each other again.
I just hope Spitfire is portrayed better than she was last time.
Still, good to have you back.
I'm sort of getting the vibe that the Shadowbolts and Wonderbolts are teams that one may be drafted into and traded from one to the other like a sports franchise.
Loved it!!
I believe it is
This seems really interesting. I can't wait to see, if they will recognize each other or not. Also will they keep this a secret from there teams, or will they admit it right when they get back? They tension is mounting, I can't wait to see what happens next.
3746831 Funny thing, I'm writing this on my iPad.
Ok. I reallyreallyreallyreally want to read this, but there is one thing bothering me-it's not past tense. I feel like it's supposed to be, but it's not as it's driving me crazy. Maybe my grammar nazi side is coming out. Heil Spellcheck!
Perhaps if ya went back through....but that's a lot of work. I'll try to sloth the grammar nazi inside and give it a go still.
Stay Awesome
RDD
cool story
That was so sweet. Funny they already went on a date, and they didn't know till later. Funny. Can't wait for the romance to continue.
Wow. That was cheesy romantic. Great job!!! Now we just need the two friends on board and then let the comedy commence. This is going to be great.
I believe it is let me have my fun.
By they way. I want Soarin to beat up Shade by the end of this story, because how he is treating Dash.
3777864 Oh I have plans for him and Soarin.
Another great chapter, but I would have personally would have liked some more hair brained excuses so people wouldn't have found out so quickly. But this is going to be good.
This is cut out to be a great story. Keep up the awesome work!
This is getting intense
Soarin. Kick is BUTT!!!!!! KICK IT AND DESTROY HIM!!!!!!!!!
Awsome
Favorite story since 2013. Keep it up!!
Okay. That was unexpected. I don't know what to say. I am glad he got what was coming to him, but jezz, Soaring killing him. Just I don't dont know how to react.
This is so good! Continue!!!
3799490 Well Soarin was blinded by rage a whole lot. So I might've over done it maybe.
3799501 That's an understatement. Well lets see how this story wraps up.
Like your other chapters, fabulous! But I do hope you make longer chapters. I also think you should correct the mistakes, or go along with an editor. Other than that, simply fabulous!
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We got Twilight coming up. Best of luck Soarin.
woooooo love this story so far
need update plz
Did you quit on the story? It hasn't been updated since January, and tomorrow is the first day of February.. (for me)
3876831 No. Just the next few chapters might be tough to write.
3876969 Oh, okay. I understand
Nice job with this chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Good job turning Shinning into a detective.
4061711 Well I like to think the AU tag gives me certain freedoms to do whatever I want.
Omg this is so good
Sweet Love Cliffhangers.
Nice job. You keep going on with your life. We won't rush. :)
4077938 Thanks. Though I did see fics where there was an update took a whole year to do.
...wow... Edit... Yikes.
Nice. That was perfect. I can't wait for the next part. Great job.
Applejack has her parents alive. That's new.
I like the touch where Scootaloo is Applejack's daughter. <:
Yay
4091935 I was going too have Fluttershy appear. But I changed my mind afterwards.
Woo they won the case
And nice touch with fleetfoot and night fury being friends
Nice chapter. Time for the wrap up chapters, and I think to then wrote a great story.
Great job with this story. I say this was one of my most favorite stories.
Why does it have to end
4101507 your profile pic made my day
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