here, come inside the castle. take everything.
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The Crystal War is getting more dangerous day by day, the fights becoming bloodier and more fierce. Rainbow isn't one to give up, even in the most hopeless situations, but she doesn't know, the world is about to crumble down on her.
Inspired by the cover art and written for Dragonfoxgirl's SoarinDash/QuibbleDash Contest
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this deserves a big thumbs up, death is a part of life but so is love. People will have to deal with both at some point and you have captured it perfectly. Well done.
Although I do think Soarin dying would have been a more realistic and held a deeper understanding of death, I like happy endings better.
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I was going to make Soarin die, but I thought if Maud died and Soarin, Rainbow would probably just go crazy from depression. And thank you!
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Thank you!
that.was.so.sad and the awesomeness story ever!!! so umm... i am going to go cry in my pillow now.........
THE ENDING THOUGH....i thought i was going 2 die when i read the But u left me....NO I DIDNT!!! i read that like 20 times.... Keep writing cause u r REALLY good!!!!! 
PS u have gained a follower...
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Thanks!
HUNGGGGGGGG my heart,this was soooooo cute
and this is defiantly going in my top 5 fav.
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Thank you!
The ending was a little bit sudden but other than that, I'd say you did pretty good with the action scenes as well as the plot. In my opinion, the story could have been spreaded out more but that's me I guess. gg
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I wanted to explain the ending, but I was freaking out, and I did not have time, but I hope you liked the story!
7545842 I did enjoy it. This is very good.
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Thank you!
I thought Soarin really died cried ny heart out andbstill now my heart feels squezzed
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Is that a good thing?
7615534 Yes it means its good and I can feel the emotion you want the feaders to feel. I really enjoy bioks or stories that makes me cry.cuz it means it's well writen.
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Oh my gosh! I love this story! It beautifully conveys heartbreak, regret, and sadness. It really made me feel emotion along with the characters. I love it so much! Keep writing!
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Thank you so much!
7652617 Of course!
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I messaged you in PM!
i cried SO much at the ending!
luv it! 
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Glad you liked it!
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No, there isn't going to be any sequel, and I found on Google Images, I'm trying to find the original artist.
OMG!!!
SO CUTE!!!
"Of course I'm okay. Did you think I would die and leave you alone on this world?"
"But you... did... You left me...." Rainbow said aloud, her voice cracking.
From behind her, a clear voice said,
"No, I didn't."
Rainbow sat stock-still, her mind trying to process who had had just spoken. She slowly turned around, her ameythset eyes meeting with emerald ones.
"I-I-I-" she stuttered, her eyes widening.
"Hey, Dashie," Soarin said holding is hoove open. "Miss me?"
Rainbow snapped. With two quick hits, she forced Soarin to the ground, glaring at him.
"Hey! I'm still fragile!"
I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT!!! WAY TO GO!!!
I WAS LITERALLY CRYING BECAUSE I THOUGHT HE HAD REALLY DIED TOO!!
Just … oh.my.god….. AWESOMEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
My heart is dead
I made a cardiac arrest xD
good story :3
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omg, i revisited this site out of curiosity after so long, i'm surprised there is actually still comments i haven't read on this embarrassing work. thank you for reading what was a really special story to me before, and even though this is a reply after an entire year, i hope you enjoyed!