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Hello, every-pony! I'm Orangeblossom1212! Like you, I'm an MLP fan! Love it! Litterly! I can't get enough! Well, welcome to my user page!


In this story Rainbow Dash learns what it truly means to suffer, when her life turns to the worst. She learns that sometimes you need to move on and let go in life. And that you can't force any pony to change. Rainbow Dash finally turns herself around when a certain newborn colt, Cloud Chaser, enters her life. She is determined to give him the life and family he deserves. The one she wishes so much she could have back! In this story Rainbow Dash learns what it means to be a mother like figure and to support a family, even through the ups and downs. Rainbow Dash learns what it means to make lifelong friends, and maybe even meet some pony who may even end up to be a little something more!

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Comments ( 113 )

If the page counter is accurate, I think this may very well be the website's 100000th story.

Or I'm just reading it wrong.

7401780 interesting! I'll have to keep that in mind!:rainbowhuh: Anyways, what do you think of the story? I'm working on the third chapter and planning for the forth and fifth. I just need to publish the second! Also I know it gets really grim but I promise it has a great ending!! :pinkiesmile:

7402562 thank you! This is my first one! I'll be sure to start the next chapter! :pinkiesmile:

If anyone dislikes the story, please leave a comment as to why. I'm open to positive criticism! But please don't thumb down because Rainbow is abused! I said this in the short and long description and I tagged it dark! horror! tragedy and sad! And please no pure hate! I'm not trying to be rude but if you thumbs down can you please tell me why?
Thank You!
Orangeblossom1212 :scootangel:

Hmm.. I won't be really harsh and stuff, cause I understand first stories, cause, I'm writing my own first story, but your story could use some editing. You have a lot of exclamation marks that shouldn't be there, and some fragment sentences. The story idea is good I guess, but I'm not going to judge! Sorry if I said anything to offend your writing! I'm just pointing out some suggestions! I'm rather good at editing, so I could help you edit it if you want. I'll help out any first writers like me! :rainbowkiss:

7403563 which chapter are you referring to? I don't know if I publish the last one. Still trying to figure it out, but if I did it's not supposed to be yet. I haven't edited it at all! :rainbowhuh: but thanks for the review!

This chapter was more correct then the last one, but both have a small amount of mistakes.

7403791 okay thanks for the help! I'll fix the grammar after I finish the chapter I'm working on!:pinkiehappy:

Nooo Problemo! If you ever need help on editing, remember you can ask me! :raritywink:

Poor Rainbow, :raritycry
RAINBOW BLAZE YOU IDIOT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightangry2:
And awesome job with the story :raritystarry:

Heyyy!!! It me again!!! You edited this chapter awesomely, just wanted some things.

Rainbow Dash jumped up as fast as she could!

The sentence shouldn't have a exclamation mark. You could rewrite the sentence so it's like this:

Upon hearing her father, Rainbow jumped out of her bed as fast she could.

There is similar mistakes like this in this chapter, but the editing is pretty good.
Hope you don't get annoyed at me for pointing out your mistakes! :fluttercry:

7406186 Of course not! Your helping me to improve!! I'm open to positive criticism! I'll look at it, I started another story so I haven't re-edited the other chapter yet but I plan on doing it in the future! Please feel free to point out my mistakes they only help me to improve! thanks for your help! You are NOT annoying! By the way I changed it!:scootangel:

I'll make sure I keep on pointing your mistakes out. :twilightsmile: And oh, I said that the exclamation at the end of the sentence doesn't really make sense. And if you want, I can point out the other things you should fix.

Poor Rainbow Dash

7408789 Thank you! I'm also starting a chapter in a Soarindash changeling story and possibly a Crystal war one. I haven't decided glad you like it!

Just a question, is Rainbow still a filly? :rainbowhuh:

7413078 Yes, she was always a filly. Did I say he, some ware? If so please tell me so I may fix it.

I honestly didn't notice this fanfic before, but its awesome, please carry on! X3

I ship Soarindash a lot!!! OTP!!!:raritystarry::pinkiehappy:

Wait a second. Aren't they like... small little ponies? How will they have a chance to join the Wonderbolts? HUHHH??? Or did I miss something? :rainbowderp: :applejackconfused:

No, I didn't mean that. I asked if she was still small or a teen or what.

Yes but it's the PRE teen wonderbolts academy. They get an anominated and they learn how to fly like the wonderbolts. The learn the basics for future wonderbolt training. If they complete the school they have more of a chance to get into the wonderbolts because they have experience prior. Maybe I should have cleared that up in the beginning better. I'm sorry I probably could have been more specific, sorry for the confusion maybe I'll change it when I get the chance.

7416288 I love your profile pic by the way. Also I have a question for you how are you always so quick to respond?!? It's like your pinkie when she turned into filliesecend in spikes comic book. HOW DO YOU DO IT!?!?

OHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! :facehoof: I BTW I'm working on your second chapter editing right now. I was supposed to send it by today, but I was really busy. Sorry!! I'm almost done, don't worry!!

Are you talking to yourself??

Oh wait, your talking to me. I'm on Fimfic alot at night. I type like almost all the time. And thanks about my profile pic!!! :pinkiehappy:

7416284 she is 6 years old. I'm not sure if I'm gong to do a chapter on how Soarin is settling in at the academy or to just go to the next part. What do you think?

7416295 ok thank you! Don't worry, you don't need to feel pressure about getting it done! I understand completely!

Hmm.. Both would be fine. Why don't you try to do the Soarin-thingy?

Soooo cute XD btw, even if Dash signed her name on, would she be able to afford it??

7416889 It was a scholarship. And she's been saving up her bits and getting bits from stores when she get a neg. Balance. She could if she really wanted too, but she'd have to work. The point is she did this out of loyalty to her friend. By sticking by his side when things were tough and needed her help to improve!


Oh, okay! Thanks :pinkiesmile: Yeah, I got the last part owo

7417812 Yes I love soarindash! I have plans for them in the next story. Except it's a changeling romance story. xD stay tuned!

hello everyone I just wanted to let you know I have the next chapter however the edited one got deleted so don't expect grammer but i'll post it

7401887 I like it!!! I finally found a soarindash fic with tourcher(abuse)!!!!!:pinkiecrazy:

7429677 ok well I haven't updated in a while and I kinda just lost interest so the next chapters may be a bit short but I'm working on the next one! Glad to hear you like it!!!!

Don't worry everypony!!!! I know this last chapter kinda sucked, HOWEVER!! I have started planning the next 16 chapters to the story so hopefully that'll make up for it? Also btw this story will have at least probably 18 more chapters. Enjoy!


Hey everypony! it me again! also just a heads up this story is going to have over 20 chapters!!! YAY!! :pinkiehappy:

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