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RainbowsInReality


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Soarin; One of the best Football (Soccer) players in CHS, has another hobby then eating pie and Football. Golf.

And when Rainbow Dash, another very good football player at CHS finds out, well.... She shocked and, well... Curious.

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Proof Read and Edited By: RDcrystalheart
(Your an awesome friend! ^^)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

Dat picture is the definition of sweg.

Other than making a few spelling errors, you have made a really cool story! :heart:

I always liked Soarindash stories in a high school setting lol good story :twilightsmile:

That was enjoyable.:twilightsmile:

Upvote!

So cute! I loved the adorable picture used in the story! :twilightsmile:

...so...what did this have to do with golf?:derpyderp1: it was still a good story tho.

Dash was cut of but a hand pulling

is the but supposed to be a by? If not I don't get the sentence.

Hey there! I have here the panel of judges from Toca Life Stories.

Rita
Zeke
Leon
Nari
Silly Burger

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Great story! But a teensy bit too mushy in the end. But, the Romance tag’s there. Can’t argue with logic!
Like yours and Leon’s cute moments? There’re quite a few! And, this story was HORRIBLE!!
Sorry, just Silly Burger being Silly Burger. It was a great story. And, what are you talking about, cute moments? Those do not exist! 😠
Yeah they do. Nora told me everything at the arcade. And this story had everything. Sports, shipping, and it was pretty cool. Croquet agrees too.
Nice story pal! And I thought they’d be cute little ponies! Those are so cute! Especially in MLP form!

Silly burger was being silly burger guys, his usual un-optimism. And the judges say that it’s a 5/5, and Silly burger got kicked out now.

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