A normal lizard that likes to doddle and write. sometimes about ponies.
When Luna thinks the lack of elements has left Equestria weak she summons a warrior from beyond the stars to help.
But let hope Discord doesn't get killed by him.
the other tag below is all the character that aren`t tagged as a character, I don`t know how many that's going to be though
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It's Vader
Darth Vader is in the house.
well there doomed
and so vader took over equestria in the name of the empire
Eeeup
But the empmire is not his 'boss' in this fic, just wait and see
so discord knows where vader is from thats interesting
I am deeply intrigued by this, but wondering where you are pulling Vader from in Star Wars timeline; from the moment he killed the Jedi children to the moment before he gave his life to save Luke, I don't think he ever thought of himself as a protector. But since he isn't thinking about conquering them and he's not thinking about the Emperor... is this some AU Vader who survived the end of Return of the Jedi, or even more AU than that?
Well it an AU in the ponies perspective from Vader it not, it a few thousand years after the second Death Star blew up, he's been dead for some time
So bring the long dead Vader back to life in equestrian was my plan and all he wants to do is rejoin the force
ha the spirits of the force are still with him im gonna guess obi wan
Please, please go back and reread this story. You are placing way too much trust in spell check. There are many words that are spelled right but are the wrong words. This along with some punctuation errors is very jarring as you read the story. I like the premise of Vader brought back after his return to the light, that and him against Discord has more possibilities than an outhouse has flies.
Just checked your bio. Nothing there to indicate age or if English is a second language I would like to suggest that you ask some of the authors on this site for help pre-readers, editors an so forth, they are very willing to help. Just go to the FAC section for information. Good luck.
B.D.
Bronzedragon thanks for the kind word, but please give me time my brain is three cells big and two of them are on holiday in my stomach, give me some direction but you not have I find them evently.... Maybe?
Love it, hope you continue with it
I am reading your fic for the tird time i like it so much i hope you continue it, thanks for sharing
This part is so powerful, think about it, two inmortal goodeses, one with the power of the sun, the other with the power of the moon, you know you are badaas when this tipes of creature shiver in fear by your presence, thanks a million that part is so impresive
fuck yea i dance!
You need a proofreader.
“Who could scare beings like Chrysalis that lack souls?”
even Discord wasn't scared of them anymore.
Luna's only counter measure, a heavy narcotic, was no more than a powerful annoyance.
Dragons and other monsters could be scared off by the guard
The typos are real. Edit man edit
this is an interesting story and idea but you really need to the typos. using the wrong words is just confusing.
All the typos make my head hurt
Like this chapter I do. Make more you will.
Finally an update I missed this story
need and editor for the typos, but so far is a good chapter
Love that ending with discord. I wonder how will the ponies react to him in the movies
This is going to be fun
Yoda is freaking awesome
"Flittershy" its fluttershy...you had it correct the past couple of chapters right here until now.and this is a good story...a tiny bit vague but overall good keep it up
Update needed.
Is this story dead?
This story is awesome man great job so far it really is great awesome job to you man
Dang it discord not yet dont be a dick yet
will this story ever update?