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The Grimm Reaper


The Grimm Reaper is the writer of the 'Darkness Duology', 'Immortal', 'They Come at Night... Mostly!' and 'Only Bone Deep'. Among others.

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It was an innocent invention. I wanted to show everypony what it was about magic and science that I loved so much. So I created a device, based off of the portal to the human realm as well as Starlight Glimmer's alteration to Starswirl the Bearded's time-travel spell. It was designed to seek different realms like the human one, each with alternate versions of everypony at alternate times. I'd even had the foresight to create a D.N.A Filter. One strand of fur, and the device would lock onto the alternate lives of that particular individual.

I was so excited. Princess Celestia, Luna, Cadence, Shining Armor and everypony came to see it in action. Rainbow Dash was the first to go. The device worked perfectly. It opened a rift that showed the town of Ponyville, an alternate Rainbow Dash. A pale blue cat with a rainbow collar. She was playing with a feline Fluttershy. Obviously the two were very young, but the device worked nonetheless.

Many ponies had a turn. And the device picked random alternate realities every time. Pinkie Pie as a Squirrel, Rarity the Swan Armorsmith, Bunny Fluttershy fighting a snake, Dragon Applejack for President.

Then Celestia proposed an idea, combining two different furs as a filter for the device. Naturally, I jumped at the chance. Combining Celestia's with my own, the device did nothing for a long moment. Then, it opened up to something that made everypony freeze with disbelief. What we saw put all villains, past and future to shame.

Nopony will forget the horrors that my invention showed.



Song: Kara Remembers - Battlestar Galactica Soundtrack

Book 1 of the Distorted Series

Note: Story will depict similarities to the Star Wars Universe, but this is NOT a crossover.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 25 )

Lolz and mean while Dimtec is watching this saying "She better not F*** with the universe. That's our job :trollestia:

Dragon Applejack for President.

:rainbowlaugh: That just made me laugh. I would read a story with that title, just to see what insanity it comes up with.

Yes! I can't wait for more! Onward!

Saying

Thank you, each and everypony.

is like saying
Thank you, each and everyone.
Thank you, each and all of you.
Thank you, each and the whole group gathered here.
which is grammatically incorrect.


if you say
"Thank you, each and every pony"
that is like saying
Thank you, each and every man
Thank you, each and every human
these are right, but still awkward

YES. ALL OF MY YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS.

Rainbow Cat!!!! Need more! Onwards!

Nice chapter, waiting for the next chapter excitedly.

Ever since I was a pup, I saw this wolf as a goddess,

Wait, so are they still ponies in this universe, or are they wolves?

6766360 wolf beacuse I'm pretty sure no pony knows how to even use wepones anymore

6766360 Yes, they're wolves. But since it's difficult to get a picture that best suits the story, I used a silhouette of Kylo Ren.

6767750 Okay. One more question. I know they're anthro in this new universe, but are they anthro in the original universe?

6768532 No, the ponies are not anthro, but the wolves are.

My clothing was purely robed; black as my heart.

Maybe she should have hooked up with moonbutt instead, on account of all that cheese.

Fix the formatting in that second section, it's broken right now and makes it painful to read.

So, is Wolf!Twilight R63ed or is this Dusk guy a different person? Also, sorry for all the questions.

6806555 you'll have to be more specific. If you mean the POV section title, then I've just fixed that. If it's something else, go to Specsavers. :rainbowlaugh:

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I mean the part where that entire section is center-aligned instead of left-aligned for no good reason, given that the previous section was formatted properly.

6809127 Oh right. Didn't notice that, thanks. Lol, maybe I should go to Specsavers.:rainbowlaugh:

Wow! This is one of the very first stories that I liked in my first year of creating my username. Like to see how you been doing.

Then Celestia proposed an idea, combining two different furs as a filter for the device. Naturally, I jumped at the chance. Combining Celestia's with my own, the device did nothing for a long moment. Then, it opened up to something that made everypony freeze with disbelief. What we saw put all villains, past and future to shame.

Nopony will forget the horrors that my invention showed.

"Spike, if you would be so kind?" I asked. Spike did as he'd done from the beginning, punched in a load of random numbers. But those numbers, as I'd come to discover, would be engraved in my memories for as long as I would live.

25/12/1015|0000001

Geez, overreacting much? What a bunch of babies they'll are. 🙄

Look Twilight, aren't you smart?

You should realized by now that in the vast multiverse, their are sadly tons of alternate DARK worlds/timelines/dimensions in there, that has wars, death, and destruction like this.


Why make this a big ass deal, like you seen H.P Lovecraft's world?

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