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David the Lich King ventures to Equestria, by request of his father, to visit the Princess of the Sun, Celestia herself. David believes this to be a test, if only he knew how right he was.

A Darksiders 2 crossover. But does not follow Death.

Set after season 3.

Some characters are Rule 63.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 25 )

Well interesting to say the least. Hope to see another chapter friend.

I'm interested to say the least. are the ponies anthro or humanized?

Keep this one runnin' Volt. I'm really liking it.

4201870 The tags say anthro.

4202208 never played darksiders 2 so don't know the term earthers

4202387 You used the term "earthers" when they was saying horns and wings. I thought it was from the game

4202394 Wat?
I literally just wrote: "The tags say anthro."

4202394
4202402
The ponies are anthro, and Earthers is a term I came up with.

Unicorn Ponies=Unicorns.
Pegasus Ponies=Pegasai.
Earth Ponies=Earthers.

It always bugged me that there was no nickname to shorten Earth Pony, so I came up with Earther. Sorry if it caused any confusion.

4201870
The only reasons for the human tag are because David was born a human, and he stays in that form for a majority of the story.

And if anyone is wondering, the cover art is King Dravigoth, David's full power form.

This is good so far.

Interesting. It is a rare sight to see a loving father, and a rare sight to see a story that appears to be focused on the philosophical facets of life.

I do my best to give feedback on whatever I read, so here goes.

You seem to have a very powerful character at your disposal. What you do with him is up to you, but if you need to make an enemy for him to confront, give the enemy dimension. What I mean is, do not create a bad guys simply to create somebody who gets the snot beat out of him. Instead, create somebody with real motivations that the reader can either respect or dislike. (This, of course, is to be ignored if it is an inherently hostile creature like a manticore.)

That is all the input I am willing to give at this time, goodbye.

The idea is interesting and new and it appears to be well written thus far. I look forward to seeing future chapters. :coolphoto:

Ooooooh-ho-ho-ho-ho, David has NO idea what he is in for :rainbowlaugh: :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:. I bet his face when he first sees Equestria will be this :pinkiegasp: and then this :flutterrage:. It's gonna be so hilarious.

will you continue this?

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Yes. Please be patient.:twilightsmile:

this is very well scripted for a first.:eeyup:

4942905 You could say that.:trollestia:

4943147 Great start.

Love this beginning, and I can already see the awkward complications Our Lich King is gonna have when he meets the ponies XD

Good first chapter. Hope you update soon. It's been two years.

Question: Update?

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