"I....I think we should see other ponies.... I mean I love you Baen, I really do. But I just don't think I might be the mare for you. You understand right?"
"I...understand....."
After the day when Coco broke up with him, the day the stoic barbarian's heart was broken, Baen became lost and depressed. For many days he wondered without a destination, just trotting and going through the motions. Many of his friends wanted to talk to him about it, but he avoided them. One night, in a stupor, he finds himself in Twilight's castle and the next morning he had vanished. His friends didn't look much into it, thinking he had gone on a vacation. But he did not go to a resort or an island, but to a different world. But his arrival and mannerisms draw the attention of many people, the first being a group of girls who not only seek to befriend the barbarian, but to help him see things aren't so bad. And the other being three girls who wish to nab him for their own nefarious purposes and the purposes of another. But all is not dark, for out of these girls, a miss Sunset Shimmer feels a connection with the wayward warrior, and perhaps something more. But can one of the strongest magic's bloom when a threat looms on the horizon?
A little non-canon/spin-off in the Baen-Verse
I've waited a long time for this story. Keep up the good work.
This is going to an interesting story. I liked how this story started. I can't wait to read how it progresses and if anew villain emerges. Suggestion, bring in the other Twilight Sparkle, that would be funny to see Baen react to loner Twilight.
the pacing seems okay cryptic
Awesome reaction with Baen. "the Pink One" This is great. I can't wait till next one. Thanks. Good luck. Also thanks for the quick updates.
Love the chapter and the quick update.
forgive your enemies but never forget and if it breaks the fourth wall run good job baen
Forgot to ask, do you think any of the girls will comment on Baen having a nice ass just like the mares comment that he has a nice flank?
well baen just told 3 demons in sheep's cloths to piss off
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Cause he takes nothing from monsters
5133973 true but I know he lost the ax but will he get a axe guitar
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Now my dear reader, whenever did I say he lost his axe?
5134002 well I imagine he wouldn't have it at school would he
Love the chapter.
5134082 i'm pretty sure it might have said in his first appearance that he had a guitar. another name for a guitar is an axe.
Great chapter. I like how now Celestia is taking a role in fighting these forces. Good luck with the next chapter. Thanks for the update.
I am loving this.
very
As in the goddess of witchcraft and sorcery?
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Yes, that Hecate
This has my interest.
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Really? How did I nab ya?
5137379 The way that Baen told off the Sirens. XD GENIUS!
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U ain't seen nothing yet
5137425 AWESOME! Nuff said.
I like the rapid updates. One of my favorite parts of this story is his reactions to the other main six. I can't wait to read the when the romance starts.
Nice chapter.
It's always best to have a pase that suits you best
Sunset shook her head with a good natured smile, “its fine.”
it's, if you put the other its then the spelling and meaning of the word is wrong
so his ax is a guitar in his locker good good he can jam out
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No it's still an ax
Oh, sh*t is just about to hit the fan!
Nice idea with Baen starting to dance. I can't wait to read what the Sirens are going to do to Baen. Good luck with the next chapter.
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Its Axe body spray now
5152291 noo baen you fell to the dark side old spice is better
that didn't seem evil at all I mean who solves rubix cubes it must be witch craft
Love the chapter.
Good job Sunset. I can't wait to read what happens next. Also we need to find out about Hecate and what she wants with this and how she even learned about magic in the first place.
5163438 I think it's funny because Sonata is supposedly so dumb or clueless or whatever, that Hecate never expected her to solve it. More than anything, I think Hecate just gave it to Sonata to keep Sonata away from Hecate's stuff.
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Mhm, right on the money good sir
5165905 Yeah, I just went by Sonata's personality from when I saw her in the movie.
Interesting story so far.
When can we expect the next chapter?
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I posted in a blog that this will start updating regularly when the main canon is finished.
5508643 Main Canon?
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the trilogy itself. I'd be more comfortable if I did
I KNEW IT!
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I lost the notes for it