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"I....I think we should see other ponies.... I mean I love you Baen, I really do. But I just don't think I might be the mare for you. You understand right?"
"I...understand....."
After the day when Coco broke up with him, the day the stoic barbarian's heart was broken, Baen became lost and depressed. For many days he wondered without a destination, just trotting and going through the motions. Many of his friends wanted to talk to him about it, but he avoided them. One night, in a stupor, he finds himself in Twilight's castle and the next morning he had vanished. His friends didn't look much into it, thinking he had gone on a vacation. But he did not go to a resort or an island, but to a different world. But his arrival and mannerisms draw the attention of many people, the first being a group of girls who not only seek to befriend the barbarian, but to help him see things aren't so bad. And the other being three girls who wish to nab him for their own nefarious purposes and the purposes of another. But all is not dark, for out of these girls, a miss Sunset Shimmer feels a connection with the wayward warrior, and perhaps something more. But can one of the strongest magic's bloom when a threat looms on the horizon?

A little non-canon/spin-off in the Baen-Verse

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 48 )

I've waited a long time for this story. Keep up the good work.

This is going to an interesting story. I liked how this story started. I can't wait to read how it progresses and if anew villain emerges. Suggestion, bring in the other Twilight Sparkle, that would be funny to see Baen react to loner Twilight.

the pacing seems okay cryptic

Awesome reaction with Baen. "the Pink One" This is great. I can't wait till next one. Thanks. Good luck. Also thanks for the quick updates.

Love the chapter and the quick update.

forgive your enemies but never forget and if it breaks the fourth wall run good job baen

Forgot to ask, do you think any of the girls will comment on Baen having a nice ass just like the mares comment that he has a nice flank?

well baen just told 3 demons in sheep's cloths to piss off

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Cause he takes nothing from monsters

5133973 true but I know he lost the ax but will he get a axe guitar

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Now my dear reader, whenever did I say he lost his axe?

5134002 well I imagine he wouldn't have it at school would he

Love the chapter.

5134082 i'm pretty sure it might have said in his first appearance that he had a guitar. another name for a guitar is an axe.

Great chapter. I like how now Celestia is taking a role in fighting these forces. Good luck with the next chapter. Thanks for the update.

I am loving this. :ajsmug::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::raritystarry::scootangel::twilightsmile::yay::heart:

After Baen had left without another word aside from short answers and returned to Ponyville, Coco became greatly worried and sent a letter to Twilight. Twilight, being Baen’s Blood Sister, became increasingly worried. It wasn’t just the fact that it was because Baen had been dumped and was most likely feeling things he had never felt before, and she didn’t want him to be alone in this time. So it was only natural that when she found Baen outside of his house staring into space, that her worry increased.

very

Canterlot High. The building itself had made a few headlines in the past. A few successful fundraisers here, a few otherworldly occurrences there, it was particularly famous. However, one girl had missed a majority of it due to being out of town for a month. That would be the Student Council President, Hecate. The girl stood outside the building, her skin was a light mulberry with soft blue eyes. Her hair was a dark indigo with lighter streaks of violet in it. The style was long but a nice wavy pattern to it. On her face was a pair of horn rimmed glasses with deep plum frames. On her torso she wore a white tank top with an indigo and white plaid skirt. Her boots were black with indigo laces that reached just below her knees. Covering her arms were a pair of plum and white striped arm warmers. She hugged herself as several students smiled her way. She gave a half wave as she was greeted by all. Hiding behind her hair as she went into the building, inside the building, many students were either conversing or in one case finishing a punishment.

As in the goddess of witchcraft and sorcery?

This has my interest.

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Really? How did I nab ya?

5137379 The way that Baen told off the Sirens. XD GENIUS!

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U ain't seen nothing yet

5137425 AWESOME! Nuff said.

I like the rapid updates. One of my favorite parts of this story is his reactions to the other main six. I can't wait to read the when the romance starts.

Nice chapter.

It's always best to have a pase that suits you best

Sunset shook her head with a good natured smile, “its fine.”
it's, if you put the other its then the spelling and meaning of the word is wrong

so his ax is a guitar in his locker good good he can jam out

Oh, sh*t is just about to hit the fan!

Nice idea with Baen starting to dance. I can't wait to read what the Sirens are going to do to Baen. Good luck with the next chapter.

5152291 noo baen you fell to the dark side old spice is better

that didn't seem evil at all I mean who solves rubix cubes it must be witch craft

Love the chapter.

Good job Sunset. I can't wait to read what happens next. Also we need to find out about Hecate and what she wants with this and how she even learned about magic in the first place.

5163438 I think it's funny because Sonata is supposedly so dumb or clueless or whatever, that Hecate never expected her to solve it. More than anything, I think Hecate just gave it to Sonata to keep Sonata away from Hecate's stuff.

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Mhm, right on the money good sir

5165905 Yeah, I just went by Sonata's personality from when I saw her in the movie.

Interesting story so far.

When can we expect the next chapter?

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I posted in a blog that this will start updating regularly when the main canon is finished.

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the trilogy itself. I'd be more comfortable if I did

Sonata held up the completed rubix cube, “YES! I DID IT!”

I KNEW IT! :pinkiehappy:

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I lost the notes for it

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