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lol, that's the most likely thing to happen.
Universal troll.
Aaaaahhahahahahahaha!
That was a fantastic way to end the chapter!
The end.
“Okay Tia, let’s bang!”
Has she been getting lessons from Cloud Kicker?
And everypony fucked, the end.
It's about time he stops overthinking it.
*snerk* We need a Cloud Kicker emoticon, STAT.
*pondering* Actually, why wait?
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Yeah, that's it. I don't like clopfics, and this chapter has pushed this fic close enough to that territory with just the opening alone to say both clopfic and slap a mature tag on it. It was fun while it lasted, but... Ugh. Seriously. I could handle mentions of sex and implying it, but you just outright included it there, accidental or otherwise. Word of advice- if you want to keep your teen rating, you might wanna revamp this chapter- because that's MORE then enough to push the fic to Mature.
5661843 roll the credits!!!!
that begining. Not only do we watch it at times, we also grab the popcorn.
AND that ending.
Well. Fae went from super awkward voyeurism to super classy.
Character development!
5662154 If you do not like it, that's your own thing. Rest of us still enjoy it.
Honestly, even as a clopfic, its still rather good.
This is well, incredible levels of cynicism, especially when we know love is an incredibly powerful force in it's own right in the ponyverse.
You're writing Tia as someone using them as basically sex toys to get around fairy's 100% legitimate fears and avoid conflict, and while Tia does use and manipulate people not like this.
They clearly aren't going to have a meaningful relationship with the princess, They are never going to hurt her, or win an argument with her, or do anything to break through her facade which is a necessity for a meaningful relationship.
And if they did have a meaningful relationship? Get close to the Sun and get burned, Everyone who can break through Tia's Facade Was hurt by her in some way.
... Right. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
"Okay Tia, let's bang!"
(o.O) (o.o)
(O.o) (O.O)
Welp...This might help.
Wait...I remmbered this story was Teen rated....since when it became Matured?
5662050 here's something even better.
where my
"Where is that story? I could have sworn that I saw it had an update. Actually, I can't find it at all...Oh, it's got the mature tag now. Well, that explains why it wasn't showing up. I can't say I'm surprised, it had been pushing the line between teen and mature. Well, let's see what we've got now...
"Oh. Apparently this is turning into an actual clopfic now. Well, I'm done."
At one point, this story was one of my favorites on this site. I haven't read much over the past few months, but this is the one story that I would always come back and read whenever it updated. But now I'm done with it. I'd noticed something of a decline in quality recently, as the past few chapters just seemed to be Fae moping about the same things over and over and over without doing much about them or making any real progress. But since I liked the story, I stuck with it out of a hope that it would improve and return to the interesting story it was before. Instead, it turned into a clopfic.
So I'm done with this story now. It was good while it lasted, but it no longer interests me. I wish you the best with the rest of this story and whatever other stories you write in the future (and I will keep following you to see what else you write, because I do still like most of what I've seen you write).
5692576 you call this a clopfic? Unless you get off on conversations about sex, this is not clop.
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Really? I seem to recall this chapter talking about Celestia masturbating, or something along those lines. Now I will admit that I might have only given this chapter and the comments on it a quick read through, so maybe I got the wrong impression. But even so, I think that I was really just looking for an excuse to stop reading this story, which doesn't exactly speak highly of it.
Okay Tia, let’s bang.
bout bucking time.
I got a bucket of chicken. You wanna do it?
its
fed off of
“Oh!
sporting
where my cutie mark should've been
Princess
This is stupid and wrong on so many levels... I can't even express. Well, beside the fact that she is suffering. That's... part true.
Praise the sun. Claim the sun. Let her get supernova in bliss and burn in pasdion for all eternaty
“Oh this is a fortuitous turn of events.”
YEEEEESSSS!!!!