Love granny Smith in this

"Good." Sensually, he said

We waited exactly how long for you to use this word?

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You'll have to wait a bit longer than this, actually.

I've been saying that people would know where the title comes from when they see it. This wasn't it, but thanks for pointing it out so nobody else gets confused. I've changed it to be less confusing.

Pffftttt hahaha this is awesome! Granny Smith is adorable, Rarity is adorable, Big Macerilee, soooo good.

Glad the two finally got somewhat of a break from the drama, and so lustful love shalt ensue in between chapters.

Way to go Vivvy! Super excited for the next chapter when it comes around!

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The new chapter is up, BL! Hope you enjoy it!

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Writing Granny Smith was probably my favorite part of this chapter. That, or Rarity being a total fangirl.

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6443328 My thoughts exactly.

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Glad you're liking it so far! Thanks for letting me know!

Definitely beautiful story so far :D

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Glad you're enjoying it! New chapter should be coming out tomorrow.

Kick-ass avatar, by the way.

"I love you, too." I wanted those words more than I wanted air.

Poor blue birdie!

Oh my Celestia, Granny. STOP it!

A lot has happened in only a couple weeks. Tom and Bronze are still very sinister characters, and during the carriage ride,I kept thinking that Braeburn needs to stop being so trusting and Soarin needs to stop being so air-headed. I'm so glad they finally talked things through; it's been so hectic they haven't had a chance. I'm surprised Braeburn hasn't told Mac about the abuse. And that was a nice touch bringing in the show canon with his broken leg

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Granny was tons of fun to write. And thanks! I'm always looking for ways to weave the show into the story.

Granny Smith... just, Granny Smith.. wow, that was hilarious!

Also, I enjoyed the ship name drop.

God, this was such an amazing chapter. Granny Smith is best character, Cheerilee is MVP, the Apple family dynamic is great, Rarity likes stallion on stallion, and Soarin bottomed!

All the good stuff aside though, I still can’t stop thinking about how this all ends eventually, and there’s no way for it to end well.

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No matter how it ends, I hope you find (found?) the ending satisfying.

gotta say i really love how you wrote granny smith in this because old people are really like this. they just have no fucks to give anymore and will just say whatever they want, for worse or for better

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Thanks! She maaaaay have been partially based on one of my actual grandmothers.