.... dear God, have I ever mentioned you have the distinct ability to make scenes so very real that you can imagine yourself in them, and forget, for a moment, that you're reading a story? This is one of those times.

Those coma dreams need to be animated. I need to see what you saw while writing them

Damnit, Vivid!

Yeah, Syn had the same reaction I had to the last chapter.

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I echo this sentiment.

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