That should say it all

Loving sex is the best kind of Sex!
LET THE SQUEEING COMMENCE!

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Eeyup. All that character development and self-reflection drove me wild, too!

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It's absolutely the best. I couldn't agree more.

Next sex part?! (Kidding)

Seriously, love it...

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~Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~

*Squeeing intensifies*

I know people in the past have hinted that perhaps you were teasing us too much, but I really feel like all the character and plot development that has gone into this story has made the intimate scene so much more meaningful. Not only does it further the characters' relationship, but it also furthers the story. The intimacy feels like it actually had a place here instead of just being another case of *insert clop scene here because readers want it.* Fantastic execution of this plotline thusfar! I eagerly await your next chapter!

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This is the reason I prefer reading stories like this where sex is going to happen.

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Thank you so much for the kind words. I was on the fence for a long time about the adult content, since I didn't want the intimacy to feel token or stick out like a sore hoof. Thanks for letting me know it worked well! It means a ton to me.

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Keep up the good work. As much as I enjoy reading about sex between two gay horses, I prefer having a story that leads up to it.

hazzuh!! Finally it happen, the dirty deed has been fortold. Its about damn time for a good long gay story such as this to even existence in awhile. bravo my friend bravo indeed. Wonder if pet names will happen?? Also im placing my bets the end of the story won't be pretty.

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If you pay ridiculously close attention, you'll notice Braeburn figured out what he'd said before his next line.

Glad you're getting caught up! You picked a good time, too - there's a new chapter on the way (hopefully) tonight!

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Now that, ladies and gentlemen, is how you use sex to advance a storyline and develop characters.

Beautifully and wonderfully done.

This was delightful~

Braeburn gave a half-hearted chuckle. "No. Not like that." His voice was smooth and mellow and ethereal, like he was telling me a bedtime story that was about to make me cry. "I mean, a rough breakup. One with a pony you care about, deep down in your soul, and when they leave, it feels like they've taken the best piece of you with them."

Yes. ;w;

"Somepony that you couldn't imagine being without. Somepony that meant more to you than all the world."

Yes Yes Yes ;w;

I finished for him, my eyes still on the ground. "It feels like a hole in your chest." I looked up.

Oh god stop this is too realistic

I don’t think I’ve ever been more glad that sex didn’t happen in any particular instance, and I’m really glad Soarin made the right decision. The sex the morning after was great, of course, but that’s besides the point.

I do have to wonder though, how much of the 18+ portion of the story did Soarin tell Syn?

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"The whole story."

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damn dude you need to type sex scenes more often

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Thanks! If you like that sort of thing, make sure you check out the side story, "Sensation - Las Pegasus" after you've read a few more chapters.

My own thick, black cock twitched next to his. I held onto his legs and rubbed us together again with a shift of my hips. I shivered as the head of my stallionhood dragged against his, and I growled a low, "Oh, fuck yeah…"

Damn...I’m tempted to draw that...

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Be my guest