Woohoo! Another awesome chapter!

Pretty awesome chapter. Lots of heartfelt moments coming out that didn't feel contrived.

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Oh thank God! I was worried I'd laid it on too thick.

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Thanks!

5107503 No prob, man.

Wonderful chapter! The emotional development of the characters was very satisfying. I agree: it did not feel contrived at all.

Yes!yes!yes!yes!yes!yes!!!!

5116933 Thank you!

5117804 This is probably my favorite comment ever.

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Yay!

"Àaaàâæāăąaåàaäppleoosa" jarringly comedic; entirely necessary.
Things keep going better than expected. I am so suspicious right now.
Really heartfelt moments.
It might be the performer/athlete/small town boy in me but a lot of the physical observations of exhaustion and excitement you use seem very. .. familiar? Natural? Not sure, but they work well.

5124161 Totally necessary. Glad the descriptions are working.

Suspicious? Why, what could possibly go wrong?

"tom prancy"
-.-
awful pony puns are my job dude,
but aside from that, you are a beautiful human being and I love this story as if it were my child (I have filed the adoption papers but apparently you can't adopt a fanfic)

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Aw, you're just a big ol' sweetheart. Glad you're liking the story so far!

Also, I will not apologize for my brilliant, brilliant, brilliant puns.

Aaand I have found a new Favourite Story!
Oh My goodness you gotta me squeein! This is beyond Adorable!

Why in the name of Hel does this story have so few likes? It deserves all of the likes! All of them... Everywhere! Get them all!
Someone get a net! We gotta catch likes!

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HA!!! Glad you're enjoying it so far! There's plenty more where this came from (and, in fact, chapter 15 is being edited right now!).

I think the low like count comes from the niche that this story falls in: it's marked mature for sexual content, but it's not clop, so readers on both sides might be a little hesitant to pick it up. The views are crawling up with each new chapter, and as much as I wish more readers would give it a chance, I'm exceedingly grateful to everyone that's read it so far.

Thanks for the kind words, and if you have any other feedback, I'd love to hear it!

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I am still a bit disappointed by the arbitrary roll of luck that not so many are here to whitness this really good story.

Normally, i say that it is by reviewer law to find something to critique, and I still feel like that. However, the only problem is, that nothing is really popping out at me as especially offensive. At most I was complaining about the long wait between Braeburn meetings, but that was just me going "I WANT DA CUTIE! T_T" So that does not count.
You have successfully made me on occation stop reading just because the story hit a gut puncher and I had to take a moment to breathe, and then continue to read. That is a good point btw.

I cannot say much more
I am looking exceedingly forwards to the next chapter. Much more than I should considering my position IRL
(loads of Uni Stuff and way behind on writing)

Jesus man, this chapter made me legitimately cry. The emotions in this chapter just felt so real and raw. I especially love how Soarin had almost never talked about his mom for the entire story up until this crucial moment. But now I'm super curious as to what happens next. What else could've gone wrong? Part of me is thinking that Bronze will show up again.

Anyways,I know I'm commenting a bit late on this one, but I just have to say how much of a fantastic job you did with this chapter

Nearly cried here when Soarin was talking about his mom. What an awesome chapter. The emotions were raw, real, and handled amazingly. Great job with this one!

Hooked onto this fic! TuT Loving it so far!!! <3

You turned me into such a pile of giggles that people thought I was the one wearing a sombrero!
Sorry, I just love that running gag.

I don't even know WHY I laughed so hard, I guess it just happens when I'm happy. Im just gonna assume its from my asperges and call it a day.

You also made me cry so you need to fight me for that just sayin

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Ha! Awesome! I always wonder if people get those throwback lines, so it's great to hear that I'm not doing it for nothing!