Ahhh, why do you do this? ;-; This is all so sad, and it's made even worse by the fact that we know where he'll end up. (Seemingly alone in his home, without Brae, and somehow with his legs all messed up and in braces). It makes me not want to read the upcoming chapters, but I know I will anyway!

On topic though; another great chapter. You still manage to capture Soarin's emotions wonderfully, and your writing also flows nicely, it's like one smooth rollercoaster down feel-lane. Keep it up!

4640127 Gotta love frame stories. I'm glad it hasn't completely turned you off of reading the rest.

Thanks for reading and for the feedback. There are plenty more ups and downs on this roller coaster ride (especially in the next chapter), so stay tuned!

Poor Soarin. I'm hoping things look up for him soon! Onward to more...