... here I`m left completely immersed in your story and finding it difficult to find the right words to describe the experience.

Telling it trough means of an interview, both with answers getting avoided, interactions between Soarin and Syn and the story told from Soarin's perspective and recollections creates a rather personal athmosphere that captures the reader's attention and makes it easy to relate to ungoing events.

I love how much depth there seems to be to your characters, and rather than explaining that through exposition, it becomes clear in the thoughts and behaviours described in Soarin`s retelling of events, even in how behaviors are interpretted by him at times. It makes the characters seem deeper and more believable. I wonder what happened to Braeburn back in Appleoosa and look forward to potentiall finding out.

In the end all I can really say is that I cannot wait for the following chapters.

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This completely made my day.

Thanks for reading! If you've got any additional feedback or things I can improve, I'd love to hear it. Stay tuned for more chapters!

4384068 I concur.

Honestly, I wish that I could give a review of this wonderful work in greater detail, but Wireframe's comment says it all! I truly cannot wait for the following chapters. You, sir, are the sole reason that I have created this account. Oh, please, keep up the good work~!

*slap your head for that misleading clop at start* XDDD

I have to agree that this interview format is really working. It definitely adds a new depth to the storytelling. Wow, so Soarin and Braeburn both have some things they need to work through.

keep it up I love this story and quit being an ass soarin

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Soarin' has a lot to learn.

Finally started reading this, and I certainly wasn't expecting a mature romcom lol

This is a really captivating story so far!

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I'm glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for checking it out!

I’m glad Braeburn did that, honestly. It was feeling a little rape-y. We know they will get back together, obviously, but the reality check was needed.

I’m rereading this one now and man, I forgot what Braeburn was like in the beginning. This read is going to hit a bit different with what’s going on in sensation Appaloosa.

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I hope it brings new perspective without taking anything away.

It's surreal to me to be revisiting scenes like this in the sequel (and we may see some of this one soon), because even though the finer details have changed, I've always known the major beats of what's happened to Braeburn before this point of the story. I'm glad I can share that info with readers years later, now that it's more directly relevant to Braeburn’s current arc.