Dammit! You keep me roped in and teeth chattering every time I see a new chapter, bravo! You have me dying for the next chapter. You are officially worse than game of thrones.

And to think I thought I'd never be emotionally strong enough to read through the last couple chapters. You did a damn number on me, and I'm hooked again.

Two big reveals in one chapter. How long has it been since the mention of the whipped cream incident? 130 weeks? It's interesting how a little detail like that can stay with you for so long. I have to admit, the eventual revelation of it didn't disappoint.
The accident though, I hadn't seen coming. This wasn't one of the possibilities I had imagined. It makes sense, especially with Soar's feelings. It goes to show how far he's willing to go for Brae.

Last chapter was beautiful, but rather difficult to get through. This one set a slightly lighter tone. Whilst keeping Soar's feelings and emotions believable, a bit of humor or the slightly dramatic proved a wonderful compliment to it. It was also great to see Spitfire and Firestreak be a comfort to Soarin'. Sapphire Shores on the other than was amazing in her hilariously bizarre extravagance. In her own way she seemed to have all the answers and I quite admired her boldness and willingness to help.

It's wonderful to see this story come full circle. It's filled with continuity and self referential themes and situations that might not always be as apparent, over the years of this story's development, some more obscure than others, that help seed responses and situations down the line. This chapter is the perfect example of that.

Sensation remains one of my favorite pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. As always, I cannot wait to read the rest and like Vivid, get the full picture.

You certainly know how to keep one's attention, Syn...

Now to hopelessly wait for the next chapter...

I swear, the more I read this, the more I know I'll be disappointed by not being able to get so much filler details in side stories.

With everything that's been going on, I forgot that soarin got hurt. It'll be interesting to see how that happened. It's also good to see everyone supporting Soarin, although I expected him to go to that other wonderbolt who had a family (forget his name). Although it makes sense that he went to Spitfire and firestreak.
Hope your vacation is going well.

His leg got hurt because he got a jolly horse

After the massive tearjerker that was Chapter 44, it feels good to have the immediate chapter after be not quite as heavy with the emotions, at least the ones I felt hit a little close to home for me.

Keep ul the great work, man, that's all I can really say.

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Thanks for the encouragement. It means a lot. The next chapter is currently with my editor, so hopefully it will be ready in another week or so.

I sincerely hope that this story gets more attention

I always have, too, but that never seems to be the case. I think I screwed up the description or art or something. I dunno. I'm a little sad that it didn't take off the way I'd hoped, but I truly appreciate everyone who's stuck with it this. If you feel so inclined, please share it around any groups you're a part of. Thanks!

8204369 That would be so cute if there was a story if the had a colt/filly. Oh my gawd, if only I was fooking good at english to become a good author. Should of pay more attention at school
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What do you mean it wasn’t an accident? Does this means he done it on purpose for some reason. Give us the goods.

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It’ll all be revealed soon. I can’t wait for you all to find out.

"It wasn't an accident."

guessing from one of the first chapters (which i read and theorized 4 days ago now) i'm guessing he purposefully failed the stunt

ouch

I BUCKING knew it wasn’t an accident!

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