Aah, finally an update! In my opinion, I'd enjoy a warning about how graphic the sexual scenes are at the beginning at the chapter, or perhaps an option to skip the naughty bits entirely. A few grammatical errors here and there, but all in all I'm still loving it. I'm really enjoying watching Soarin's character development. The pain they feel brings me great pleasure. I can't wait to see how him and Brae get along after all of this~

4702238 Thanks, Citrus! I've added a mature content warning to my author note at the top of the page. In general, how do you feel about the sexual scenes?

Some of the weird grammar is intentional, since the story is being told by Soarin' in a more conversational tone. If you see any really egregious errors, though, feel free to point them out. The words all tend to blend together after staring at them for hours.

Thanks for the feedback, and I'm glad you're enjoying it. There's plenty more to come!

4705785 To be honest, as a gay guy the strait sex scene weird-ed me out a little bit, but I'm glad that it wasn't too detailed. But the scene itself did fit quite well, as it allowed Soarin' to get someone to talk to and all. All in all I'd say you're still doing a fantastic job. I can't wait to see what's next~

Brilliant new chapter.

I love how she encouraged him.

Holli, you keep on being awesome, girl. This chapter was brilliant. Soarin finally gets it!

Man, we all need a friend like Holli.

Also, I resonated with Soarin’ just a bit too much for my liking this chapter....

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