Lucky he got away with so little from Big Mac. That could've ended badly

i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/650/712/07b.gif BULLSHIT!!! you know why I call that because there isn't moar updates!! I haven't read a good M/M stories in a long time. I keep on reading about M/F which is fine and alot of stories are very quiet amazing. But to read M/M at this kind of length/words is very rare mate. Do hope this story continues to be long, usually this kinds of stories just end too short...very sad.

cheers mate

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Oh, totally. This chapter could have gone a very, very different direction. (Note to self: don't mess with Big Mac's family.)

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Thank you for the kind swear words. Glad you're liking it, because there's a LOT more to come. :soarinsmirk:
Trust me, if I could spend all my time on this story without screwing up my near-future plans, I would. A 4,000-word chapter takes me about 12-15 hours to go from initial drafting to posting, and then there's additional tweaking once my editors have taken a look. On the plus side, I've got the next chapter written out, and I'm hoping to post it in the middle of next week.

Enjoying a lot this tale so far. You established well Soarin character as someone that looks for one-night stands not for the sake of it, but due to a inner need. Also it's very interesting to see Soarin picture himself as a super-hero and then the adventures he himself narrates show the oposite.
The interaction with fans is also done very well, very believeable.
And a personal peeve of mine: often fanfictions are wrote with "north-americans dressed as ponies", with the characters using and refering to modern day technology. You avoided that and put things that made sense in the pony world, like pegasi using small rainclouds as showers (I will let the long island slide ;) )
Keep up the good work

4793436 Glad you like it! And thanks for the pass on the Long Islands. I couldn't come up with any good pony puns for drinks, and Long Islands are just really tasty.

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I was actually a bit thrown off by the mentioning of safety videos because of the lack of technology in this story.

I hope soarin' gets him. I have been kind of up and down while i'm reading this story. I like it a lot, and can't wait for more.

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That's a good point. I've changed it to be more consistent with the rest of the story. Thanks for the heads up!

this was great. i really thought this was going to be how he broke his legs.

you portrayed big mac well, my only complaint being that he doesn't chew soarin's ear off at some point, like when he gets mad in the ponyville confidential, but then again i'm not sure where i would have put it in either, so that doesn't hold much.

Wowwww... major props to Big Mac for not beating the crap out of Soarin, and major props to Soarin for opening up like that. Intense but awesome chapter!

This story sat on my read it later list for far too long. Ten chapters in and I'm hooked. If I could read this all in one go I would, but it's 1am and I've still got 42 more chapters to go. Can't wait to see where the story goes! Also, drunk, angry Big Mac is scary!