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Interesting... I'll look forward for more... upload soon!
what is with the constant use of rape in your stories? not against using it as a narrative device just use of a similar tool over and over.
I find it's an interesting narrative device, and I like to give it the gravity that rape deserves. Combine that with a year of near-constant abuse for a very prideful, self-confidant character...
I like the premise of this story. Bringing Rainbow Dash home and all that. Won't be easy for anypony though, so I'm looking forward to more
I have not seen any of your previous work so I don't know how good you are at writing, but this idea has a lot of potential if done well. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Something a lot of writers seem to have trouble with is context. Just because WE know these characters doesn't mean you shouldn't take the time to introduce them better. Without context, there is no real "breaking" of Rainbow Dash. The Rainbow Dash we're introduced to isn't the brash, headstrong pegasus, but a victim, and almost an entirely different character, so the weight of using rape as a narrative device is effectively lost.
That aside, your pacing needs work. The chapter moved too fast for me to get involved, or want to. Dark content can be effectively immersive, but you have to MAKE it immersive.
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Thank you for the advice! Yes, I'm afraid pacing has always been one of my writing flaws.
Um... Were spitfire and dash an item? Is that as she felt ice in her gut when she saw dash?
As for the Minotaurs and griffins in the camp BURN IN TARTARUS, YOU EVIL BASTARDS!
Please release the next chapter soon, I need to know what happened
Also
I never thought the wonderbolts could be so scary
interesting, I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
Keep up the good work
Poor Rainbow.
OH THE FEELS!
I do enjoy this story and look forward to the next installment.
Keep up the good work
Also I cant wait for some DashFire!
Or even some FleetDashFire!!!v
I ship it hard!
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FleetDashFire, eh? Hrm. Could certainly be interesting!
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Indeed!
But not one of those where they have to eventually choose just one, those hurt my feelers lol
Besides, Dash deserves all of the love!
wow...nice work man...you seem to be handling this topic well. I can understand why this was hard for you to write and you pulled though and made it work.
Keep it up man. Your doing good.
...Im liking it, please continue.
I am slightly Surprised the rest of the mane 6 were not among the first to visit her however, oh well im sure you will explain later.
Too soon for Romance isn't it? Still loving this. 3 chapters in 1 day THANK YOU SO MUCH!
I was honestly expecting the griffin to be Gilda, come to see if rainbow was okay, feeling bad that the last time they'd spoken she'd said such horrible things to the Pegasus, and wanting to make up for it after what her own kind had done to rainbow.
I like this story as for what is happening to RD Let me put it as I would if I was IC (In Character) in my Chatroom:
*Golden Eyes Glow Brightly as I flex the claws on ALL my paws and bare my fangs with a deep rumbling Growl escaping* target LOCKED, MInotaurs are now PREY!!!
4358909 Its never too soon for romance!
Damn. Now I want FleetDustDashFire ship!
Dash x ALL THE MARES!
I really hope Lighting Dust survived, even if FleetDustDashFire doesn't happen, she could still be a good friend for Rainbow Dash.
4358909. Hehe, dont worry. It will be a good while before true romance
Ah, I see now that scum still inhabits the Everfree. No doubt this is common. When I was younger I had a bought with a minotaur. Bastard creatures that they are.
Gotta be honest.
There's a line between justice, and unjustified torture with revenge as an excuse.
This treatment crossed it, especially since they don't even know what she was doing and they're already threatening with a freaking death penalty.
What the heck.
4359635. I'm still deciding on the ship. Spitfire/Dash will happen, but if you all want more I can certainly add... one more. Later on. ;)
4360227 OK!
-FleetDashFire 4ever!
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Well, as was alluded to before, Luna and her Night Guard have very much become... colder, with the supposed death of Rainbow Dash, and an ongoing slavery/foalnapping crisis in Equestria.
Not that what Luna did was entirely justified, but one can understand where she is coming from. Especially since they are assuming the griffon may have been coming for Rainbow Dash again, AND just possibly fatally wounded a Wonderbolt.
4360227 no shipping. shipping would be rather unecessary. and i highly doubt she is into relationships at the moment all things considered.
4367600 No. Shipping is needed. A relationship is indeed a sign of moving on and reclaiming ones life
Not to mention that the author originally made this story to be a SpitDash ship fic at some point
-FleetDashFire 4ever!
Just a quick question,
Is Discord reformed in this fic? And if yes do we get to see him reacting to the abuse his dear Flutters foalhood friend had to endure?
Otherwise: at times got a bit of rushed sence, but overall definately a fic which deserves a bit more attention. Keep up the good work
How long until Scootaloo comes to visit her honorary big sister? And I nominate the Minotaur ambassador for a Darwin Award, won't last long if he thinks insulting the Princess of the Sun's friends and defending a slave camp in her backyard.
Dang and breeze you can be very scary when you want to be if your reaction to chapter three is any indication. Got me Scared just reading the comment. Oddly enough this story s reminding me of a story I stopped writing a month ago. I called it broken rainbows and wings of fire. Basically it's similar to this only dash was kidnapped by blue blood for revenge on the disastrous gala incident. Two months later and spitfire regretting her actions with dash finds her. Ieven gave Celestia her own version of nightmare moon. Solar flare. Imagine Celestia in twilight's flame rage shift. Just turn the white the colors of fire when you imagine it. Yeah my imagination scares me sometimes.
4399480 He is! And don't worry, I have plans for him, but he's a tad busy with a certain buttery pegasus to be contemplating revenge for his friend at this moment.
why da discord and fluttershy ship? i can't help but imagine him like an old uncle for some reason so it is kinda creepy to me....... shrugs.
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That particular ship comes from how I've seen their interactions since his reformation. Fluttershy has always been the one he relied on the most for friendship, and I can easily see that blooming into love, given time and the right emotional experiences.
so twilight did permanent damage to herself and to the sky's of Canterlot when she lost it over rainbows death? OK then. Also the discord and flutershy ship is a bit...Meh. Overall though im enjoying this.
4478818 if you watch rainbow dash presents bittersweet, fluttershy says she has always had a crush on her uncle, so your statement is valid.
4478886 i normally do not watch the parody stuff. shurg.s just not my taste.
Dang that got me in the feels really hard! I may be a fan of celesticord but fluttercord is a very close second. But man I hope rainbow's kid takes after her and not at all like the bastard who raped her. Well except looks but man I hope Gilda can help out. She might know how to help raise a half griffin child. Oh have Gilda as a baby sitter could work on repairing that friendship. That or a on site godmother. The two seemed to be more like sisters in all but blood and species. Heaven and hell knows rainbow needs a griffin's advice and one she can trust.
it was a little hard to read this without any spacings, but i managed and like what i read.
i will admit, my heart jumped into my throat when they mentioned fluttershy was in hospital, because i started thinking maybe she'd been captured like rainbow but rainbow hadn't known it.
i was revealed, and a little surprised to learn she was their because of discord's child (though i won't lie, it wasn't until it was pointed out as discord's child that i stopped worrying, since the idea that she'd given birth just reinforced my fear that she'd been in the same situation as rainbow).
i now can't help but think maybe rainbow's will be born a pony, but with griffin wings or claws.
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So far I'm a bit... torn. It'll either be hippogriff or another amalgam creature like Golden Hope. Anyone have opinions?
FlutterCord is now my head cannon if it makes adorable little fillies. I almost feel sorry for the Diamond Tiara of Hope's generation, if Hope doesn't use Chaos powers on the bully her father will!
My only negative thought is this: HOW COME RAINBOW'S HONORARY LITTLE SISTER SCOOTALOO ISN'T THERE???!!!!
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Do you want to show Scootaloo her idol, broken and afraid?
4478901 rainbow dash presents (rdp) is a video form of many famous fanfics (Rainbow Factory, Bittersweet, My Little Dashie, ETC.) So there not parodies of the show, but of famous fics
4480374 I think Scootaloo would just be relieved to see her big sister no matter what condition she's in.