Thought to be dead for over a year, Equestria is stunned when Rainbow Dash returns, having been made the slave of a sadistic griffon for the past year. Her friends are understandably overjoyed, but can they handle the nearly broken pegasus?
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why da discord and fluttershy ship? i can't help but imagine him like an old uncle for some reason so it is kinda creepy to me....... shrugs.
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That particular ship comes from how I've seen their interactions since his reformation. Fluttershy has always been the one he relied on the most for friendship, and I can easily see that blooming into love, given time and the right emotional experiences.
so twilight did permanent damage to herself and to the sky's of Canterlot when she lost it over rainbows death? OK then. Also the discord and flutershy ship is a bit...Meh. Overall though im enjoying this.
4478818 if you watch rainbow dash presents bittersweet, fluttershy says she has always had a crush on her uncle, so your statement is valid.
4478886 i normally do not watch the parody stuff. shurg.s just not my taste.
Dang that got me in the feels really hard! I may be a fan of celesticord but fluttercord is a very close second. But man I hope rainbow's kid takes after her and not at all like the bastard who raped her. Well except looks but man I hope Gilda can help out. She might know how to help raise a half griffin child. Oh have Gilda as a baby sitter could work on repairing that friendship. That or a on site godmother. The two seemed to be more like sisters in all but blood and species. Heaven and hell knows rainbow needs a griffin's advice and one she can trust.
it was a little hard to read this without any spacings, but i managed and like what i read.
i will admit, my heart jumped into my throat when they mentioned fluttershy was in hospital, because i started thinking maybe she'd been captured like rainbow but rainbow hadn't known it.
i was revealed, and a little surprised to learn she was their because of discord's child (though i won't lie, it wasn't until it was pointed out as discord's child that i stopped worrying, since the idea that she'd given birth just reinforced my fear that she'd been in the same situation as rainbow).
i now can't help but think maybe rainbow's will be born a pony, but with griffin wings or claws.
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So far I'm a bit... torn. It'll either be hippogriff or another amalgam creature like Golden Hope. Anyone have opinions?
FlutterCord is now my head cannon if it makes adorable little fillies. I almost feel sorry for the Diamond Tiara of Hope's generation, if Hope doesn't use Chaos powers on the bully her father will!
My only negative thought is this: HOW COME RAINBOW'S HONORARY LITTLE SISTER SCOOTALOO ISN'T THERE???!!!!
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Do you want to show Scootaloo her idol, broken and afraid?
4478901 rainbow dash presents (rdp) is a video form of many famous fanfics (Rainbow Factory, Bittersweet, My Little Dashie, ETC.) So there not parodies of the show, but of famous fics
4480374 I think Scootaloo would just be relieved to see her big sister no matter what condition she's in.
4480163 Rainbow colored Hoppogriff, with feathers in the same pattern as Rainbow's hair. ABSOLUTELY NOTHING FROM THE MALE SPERM DONOR BESIDES GRIFFON DNA. Rainbow should not have to see any trace of him at all.
4478954 all good points.
wow! Fluttershy and Discord having a baby?! Gotta say I totally didn't see that coming!
Also your writing seems to have improved quite a lot since your earlier stories. While they may still be slightly fast paced and short, they are still descriptive and flow well. Also WOOOOO FLEETFOOT AND SPITFIRE WERE THERE!!
Anyway keep it up man!
Yes! Fluttercord and badass Twilight! all of my yes!
Have Fluttershy be pregnant and newly crowned mother to help Rainbow through her own pregnancy, and help her with the foal when it comes? Sure.
But why did it have to be Discord?! Yeah, you wrote in a comment that you based it upon what happened in the show, but why? I can find no one logical point or argument that would explain why it was Discord save your own opinion of what happened in the show. Couldn't it just as easily have been Big Macintosh? Those two have much more in common than Discord would have with Fluttershy, and while Discord does rely heavily on Fluttershy, it just... doesn't make sense for them to get together.
I just... I reiterate: Why?!
Dammit, Twilight. What if you'd hurt somebody in your magical bitchfest. Did you ever think of that? Did you ever bother to check? Did you ever care about anything other than yourself?
Seriously.
5069464 Um considering what the Princess did at that point She can't be blamed at all. the mane 6 are practically family to each other and have one declared dead like that. She has every cause to vent.
4478861 maybe not damage perse but a permament change to herself. She basically did a magic surge like that when she took her test but add in her new alicorn powers. I can believe it.
5090106 Agreed.
When in doubt, give your friends a shout.
It took me about 13 times reading this fic to realize.... Twilight surged.... To the point where her front hooves can act as minor magical foci.... AND MOST LIKELY CAUSED CELESTIA TO PANIC TRYING TO CALM HER DOWN.... Hell hath no fury like a mare scorned.... But not even the Eldritch Horror Who's Name I Dare Not Speak shall grant you sanctuary against Princess Twilight Sparkle with the urge to purge BEGINNING TO SURGE