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Are you going to write another chapter?
7882851 Working on it now! ^___^ Aaaaand when I get home from classes, and the bank.
7882857 I can't wait! Also, do you mind if I put this in a few of my groups?
7882858 Sure, I don't mind at all. ^__^
7882861 Thanks!
MORE I NEED MORE
Excellent first chapter, Cody, and I can't wait for the next one to pop up one is! I will be following this one closely, as I do all the lovely, wonderful stories in this account!
If I have any caveats or gripes (and don't worry, they're small ones), it's that you're using these; / /; rather than italics for emphasizing certain things, and for when somepony is thinking.
Also, it MIGHT not hurt to go back and put spaces in between the paragraphs and scene breaks.
Other than those, this chapter is wonderful, and, as I said, I can't wait for more.
And on another note (and which I should have done at the very start of this), may I wish you a hearty welcome back to writing and the site.
I cannot express just HOW wonderful it is to have you back.
Keep on bein' awesome, hun!
The way the story is written throws me off a little. I'm not good at suggestions... which leave's me kinda of hopeless. Ik. BUT anyhow. I'll let you write the way you do and hope it doesn't become a further problem
You definitely got my attention with this
Nightsong I really like this story so far, I hope you keep with it!(^_^)
This is a wonderful first chapter. I really like how the stories in this account delve into the matters of herding and political things with the different tribes. I honestly want to try and write something like this one day.
This. Great beginning. Can't wait to see what fun these three get into.
Cute opening to a hopefully promising story.
Also, I can't help but see there are some formatting issues. I think the parts with double slashes (/word/) are supposed to be italicized, but I could be wrong.
7883508 Fixed!
holy jesus thirteen hundred bits for that amazing thing and she has been selling at 450? she could have been making millions of bits off of that.if i could make that much oh hohoho i would be a happy stallion. 'cept this is a mare but you get the idea...
Loved the chapter and eager for the next
I LOVE this story. I am chomping at the bit for more. Huzzah for Nightsong!
Ohh I loved the way this started. Night song seems a bit like a reverse Trixie personality wise and it's nice to see someone proud of there work but not arrogant about it.
Also why do Lunar Pegasus always read as so cute?!
Hmm, that was rather cute. I needed some fluff in my day, and this worked nicely.
Yay, our Cody is back and better than ever!
Welcome back, hun! We've missed ya something awful!
And with a most excellent new chapter, too! Well met, dear friend!
And I don't know just who that "dear friend" is who helped you come back to us, but tell them that I owe them one huge hug for it!
I'm so glad that you're back! Hope things are much better for you!
Hm, I suspect that there's some dark secrets in Nightsong's past involving tribalism.
RIP my favorite TwilightxCheerilee shipfic ever. I'll never know who sent those trampolines...
I'm now kinda curious as to what kind of things Nightsong has had to deal with and if her mentions of the Rockery, Band and Clan are significant. Please update soon!
Excellent chapter, as always, Cody!
Love it, and I can't wait for the next one!
Also, many congrats on getting settled in at college, and I hope all goes well for you this school year.
On another note, I only have ONE slight caveat: you're doing THIS; /were/; again instead of using the "initalisize" button.
Hope you get this fixed soon.
Again, though, all-in-all a great chapter, hun.
Well done.
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Oh very! We're going to have alot of fun with tribal cultures.
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Great! I love the interpretations of the different tribal cultures in these stories, especially between the ponies.
Short, but definitely fun, hun!
Pinkie would definitely approve!
Love it and I can't wait for more!
Wow, I kinda suspected that Nightsong was young but I didn't imagine that she just turned 18. And her being invited to join Vinyl and Octavia's herd was a forgone conclusion to me.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Nightsong? Closest would be Fluttershy or Lyra, to be honest.
A new chapter? So soon after the last one?
Huzzah!
And I can't wait to see what happens next chapter!
I agree, Nightsong is cute! Hm, is High Standards going to cause trouble or is she one of those publicly polite prejudiced ponies (alliteration!).
Can't wait for the next chapter!
...appeals to my biases!
This. Was. Awesome!
Loved it!
And I can't wait for Chapter 7 to see what happens next!
Whoho, this chapter was hot! Glad that Night accepted to be part of Vinyl and Octavia's herd. But all this sweet happenings mean that soon conflict might come to balance it out.
This chapter was worth the wait since the start of this story (January 2017? Wow!) This chapter was everything I hoped it would be, so keep up the good work!
Well now, I just have to keep my eye on this one.
A new chapter?
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Hehe, yup! :D
Excellent chapter as always, hun!
Loved it.
Just one slight quibble, and a comment:
The quibble?
You need to stop using these things; / /; instead of the "Italics" button for emphasizing thing, love.
I know it's out of habit, but it's odd-looking.
Okay, now to my comment:
I have found a pony that I distinctly do not like, and have pegged as the "villain" (read: bigot) of the piece: High Standards.
She strikes me as a certifiable bitch, a tribalist and somepony who disapproves of herds.
My reaction that: Buck. Her.
And her making a comment like that about NIghtsong's faith, knowing who Nighty's goddess is?
Not. Cool.
Wonder how Celestia herself would react if she heard what Ms. Nose-in-the-Air said about those who are Lunarian?
Probably wouldn't be too happy.
Again, great chapter, hun.
Can't wait to see what happens in Chapter 8!
I had this High Standards mare pegged as a racist bitch since her first appearance. And this second appearance just makes me dislike her even more. Still, this as a wonderful chapter and I'm glad that this story is still updating.
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Absolutely! Roomie-verse is a labor of love right now. If you haven't already, check out Tilting at Hearts, and I'll be starting a project focused on Trixie, Starlight, and a new OC soon!
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Awesome!
My one regret is how I've only but one upvote and favorite to give...
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I'm thinking a lite Romanian accent
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Absolutely, yep!
Indeed it has!
Excellent chapter, and a great way to come back to us!
Can't wait to see what you have in store for us in Chapter 9, and beyond!
Woot! Welcome back and yet another great chapter, look forward for more.
Woot!!
Welcome back.