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Crystal Secret


A 15 year old girl with a love of ponies and a passion for writing.

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For years now, Twilight has taken it upon herself to preserve the life of one of the rarest species of flower in existence. However, one stormy night after the passing of those most important to her, she find herself having to make one of the hardest decisions in her life.

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Wurd #1 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · 17 ·

Now I wanna cry!Thanks a lot!:(
Also, Twi isn't immortal,same with Cadence.
Now I feel better!^.^

That was awesome! I would love to see more stories like this one! A fave and a like is not enough for such a story!

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I know I already told you this, but I wanted to make it public too: I really like that it takes Twilight learning something to lift her out of her sorrow. It's inspiring, though bittersweet in the context of your story, to think that no matter how much time has passed, no matter how much the world has changed, her love of learning still shines through. :twilightsheepish:

Just eat the goddamned flower, Twilight.

*slips in a pool of tears*

Nice story this was. Here's my Review on it. >>> Link To Review :twilightsmile:

I enjoyed this--I think especially since so many stories are about Twilight losing people ad not knowing how to go on. Among the flood this story is a great ray of hope for the character of Twilight Sparkle and I think it's really excellent showing how she has grown. Even so far into her future she is still learning and she will continue to learn. :twilightsmile:

Not bad. :moustache:
Couple of minor grammar gripes and some unnecessary exposition, but otherwise solid and well-flowing. Point put across in a great way, though I find the existence of the flower itself a bit odd.

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