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With the First Light of Day

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As a filly, Fluttershy always wanted to see the sunrise but had a few issues when trying to get her hooves off the ground.

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Howling Wolves #1 · Jun 7th, 2014 · · ·

Nice and sweet story you got here. For me it got a but too poetic during one scene for the context of the story and a few minor errors in punctuation. Otherwise, well done!
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Stellafera #2 · Jun 7th, 2014 · · ·

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A sweet little story with great, plausible dialogue from our two main characters. I like to read character lines in their voices, and you've got them down.

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Diamond Sparkle #3 · Jun 7th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Crystal, you are a very good writer.

Crystal Secret #4 · Jun 8th, 2014 · · ·

Thank you so much.

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NobleValor #5 · Jun 11th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Well this was a cute story.

Firebrace101 #6 · Sep 5th, 2016 · · ·

Sometimes the simplest things in life are overlooked. Taking the time to appreciate them is important.

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