• Member Since 22nd May, 2012
  • offline last seen Nov 29th, 2019

Crystal Secret


A 15 year old girl with a love of ponies and a passion for writing.

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As a filly, Fluttershy always wanted to see the sunrise but had a few issues when trying to get her hooves off the ground.

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Comments ( 7 )

Nice and sweet story you got here. For me it got a but too poetic during one scene for the context of the story and a few minor errors in punctuation. Otherwise, well done! :raritywink:
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A sweet little story with great, plausible dialogue from our two main characters. I like to read character lines in their voices, and you've got them down.

Crystal, you are a very good writer.:scootangel:

Well this was a cute story.

Sometimes the simplest things in life are overlooked. Taking the time to appreciate them is important.:yay:

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