Once Fluttershy realizes her cutie mark has to do with animals, she wishes to move to Ponyville. However with things stopping her, she starts to lose hope, happiness being sapped from her life. However, Rainbow Dash decides otherwise and does everything in her power to make her smile again.
Story takes place two months after Rainbow's first sonic rainboom in Cloudsdale, back when they were fillies.
-I Am Sorry if i write Bad.-
-Haters Are Gonna Hate.-
-Bad Comments will be delete.-
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I must correct you upon what you said in your description. 'I'm sorry if I write bad'. Don't apologise, you write good. More than good. I found this very heartwarming as well as charming. Rainbow Dash seems very in character to me here as well as Fluttershy. Grammar wise, just put a comma before the name of the character the speaker is addressing. You have done this, but it just lapses in some places. But that doesn't bring down the story in any way whatsoever.
Overall verdict: 9.8/10
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Heh, Thanks ! Am Glad that you like the story !
Have I seen this before? Was this taken down or re-written?
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If you saw this story in Pony Fiction Archive. it's Mine. Because i have a account on PFA. And i write The same Story on that website.I Placed mine same story here on FIMFiction.net. I Just want To See what People are gonna React here.
4299721 Ah okay. It's just the beginning seemed so familar.
I could've sworn I've read this before, on this website. Either that or I'm having a wicked case of deja vu.
Anyways good story.
I will not let you taint my internal darkness with l...l...lovvvveee!
Well I tried to fight it off.
Seriously though, this is a really good fic. You shouldn't be downing yourself at all. The characters seemed pretty much in character, and the writing was pretty good. All in all you get an upvote and a fav.
Have a cupcake
and good luck with your future endeavors.
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If you read this on Pony Fiction Archive. Than its mine. Mine UrserName on that webiste is Racoon.
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Thanks, Glad you like It. :3
Dat momnt when dumb bell called flutters a slut i was like B!TCH PLZ and i wanted to kill him so bad X3
But still awesome story
Cute. This was a highly enjoyable read