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Nightlock106
I enjoy spending my free time jotting down ideas for new stories, though most of them either go into the trash bin or are left unfinished. Nonetheless, I hope you all enjoy the works that I publish.
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Alright, review. From one author to another.
To begin, the concept is good? I`ve never wrote clop and probably never will, but I digress. The pacing was too fast and has barely any build up.
Now, the ship. I haven`t seen a ApplebloomXApplejack ship, so good job on being original! Big Mac at the end, I have mixed feelings. They are "Southern" and would probably do that.
Anyway, it was not good, but not bad. Keep writing and you will get better.
Incest to the max.
What the buck did I just read?
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I don't really write a lot of clop either, so I'm not really that good at writing them. This is the second one that I had done, so it's understandable if it's not that good.
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Yeah, I know. But, I'm not really that good at writing clop fictions, so I don't really know how to build them up too well, or how to end them the right way. But, if you have any good pointers for me, send me a message, I'd greatly appreciate it.
think i'll have to take a look just for the cover image....
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Let me know what you think about it, and if you have any pointers on how I can do better on my clop fictions, send me a message. I'd greatly appreciate any help I can get!
Clop Clop Clop
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I know it's not that good, but if you have any pointers on how I can make my clop fictions better, then send me a message. I'd greatly appreciate the help.
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:Your story was great
:What are you reading?
:nothing
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You should check out my other clop fic A Night to Remember and tell me what you think about it. And if you have anything that you want to see from me later, send me a message.
4157723 "Applebloom is seventeen years old now,"
aaaaaand i stopped there , not interested in bs 'aged up' for the sake of avoiding labels......
HAHA! I laughed so hard at the end when big Mac said " how'bout we make this a threesome?"
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That was actually the point of adding that to the end was so that I can give people a little bit of a comic relief.
4161243 you say comic relief, I say sequel material.
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Maybe, maybe, I'll have to work on that.
DAT ending though
Dat ending though
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Nothing wrong with aged up Apple Bloom, just when you go and dump that info on the reader instead of leading into it through some other, more interesting means, you lose interest fast.
Not going to lie, I did the same thing.
4659729 A lot of people have said the same thing. This was my first aged up clop fiction, so I'm not really that good at doing them yet.
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No worries. Again, nothing wrong with aged up characters. If anything, just take your time and don't rush things. The best kind of clop has emotion and meaning to it, getting the reader invested in the sex that happens. Otherwise, all you have is characters kissing suddenly and becoming horny as hell just as fast.
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The friendly heavy says "IS GOOD"
Big Mac f@cking Bro-hoof now!
Good clop, that Big Mac introduction made it awesome.
4157376 this is the secound AJxAB clop ive seen first was from admirathion to love
4659746 ok i thought it was foalcon with both applejack and applebloom the same age as the show but i guess not