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Holocron


Gaze within the Holocron and see what stories it has to tell.

Comments ( 90 )

To short to give me a boner :ajbemused:

Was way to short, cute and has potential but needs more chapters or at least some form of conclusion.

This was cute. I did enjoy it. It was not, however, worth changing up my color scheme just to read it. I like that you have your thing with the colors, but it's really hard to read without changing up the schemes, at least for people that have a favourite one like myself.

Decent story, but you might get some crap for the colors. Just a little friendly advice from the Harbinger.

Yolo I loved it m9 please more chapters or I uninstall FIMFiction

Yeah, something tells me THAT'S going to turn into a sex-ed lesson real quick. Hooves-on. :raritywink:

I saw the title and description and was like: "Wait, is it? Iiiiiiis it...?"
And then I saw the 'sex' tag and was like: "Yeah, it is!"

"She wants your joystick dude....

LOL

I would mostly skip these kinda stories but I decided to try a filly clop story for shits and giggles and the begging when sweetie tried to be suductive I couldn't stop laughing

As per popular demand, there will be a bonus chapter. But that will be it, unless inspiration hits me. But there will be a bonus chapter to come. :twilightsmile:

SHE WANTS THE JOYSTICK!:rainbowlaugh:

good job over all but you kept misspelling Sweetie Belle. the e at the end of belle is silent.

GAMING EUPHAMISMS GALORE!

You should fix the character tags. Apple Bloom and Scootaloo aren't in it, so the CMC tag should be a Sweetie tag. Also, Button Mash counts as 'other' rather than OC, although his mother is OC.

no much for foalcon but this was bucking halarious! :rainbowlaugh:

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The funny thing is I thought I changed that. Good eye mate :raritywink:

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filly flutters in a paper bag.....(nothing is ever going to change the amount of adorableness I just saw)

Comment posted by Lickthemsoftly11 deleted Mar 6th, 2014

one does not simply want the joystick

I feel a little dirty reading this, but I'll get over it. You know this kind of reminded me of a Anime that mocked dating sims. Button take option 3... :rainbowlaugh:
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Awesome story!!! This needs a sequel about what happens after they're discovered by buttons mom!
4034860 Not for me!

I love it! More, please? :fluttercry:

Am I the only one that felt really awkward reading this?

Please five buttons mums reaction

awkward.............................:twilightsheepish::rainbowderp::twilightsheepish::facehoof:

Oh, Button. :unsuresweetie: That is one event flag you sould never avoid! :rainbowwild:

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
...not sure what to think...
...
I want more.
...Jesus, we're all bad people... o.o

I personally would like to see more, a little more story maybe, just a tiny little bit

Too many! Bad! Puns!!.... I LOVE IT!!!

Whats with the mum thing, have I just been left out on this 'mum' thing?

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Most people use the word "mom" or "mother" when describing the parent. I prefer the English term "Mum"

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I know that, but all of a sudden its in every story i read xD

Make A Sequel where sweetie belle Is Pregnant whith buttons baby:trollestia:

You have to continue these. Make more bad video game sex puns.
Much foalcon
Such cute
Many climax

Well, that was interesting and begs for a continuation! :trixieshiftright:

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When I see the word 'mum' in a story, I can't help but read the story in a British accent.

I literally started swearing aloud when I saw colored dialog.

This was...
:unsuresweetie: : What am I reading?
NO LOOK AWAY!

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