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Roxanne10


I love creepypastas and dark stories! Best Shippings are PinkieDash, FlutterCord, Fluffle Puff and Queen Chrysalis, and finally, Twilight and King Sombra! Best ponies are Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie!

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Sweetie Belle has a crush on Button, and for the past couple days she's been stalking him. Waiting to find the right time to confess her love.

Edited and proof read by: Friendship is Magic.

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Comments ( 37 )

Urm, I hope you share the same image with a clop fic involving the two.

Just saying.

4035771 I don't know you mean.

The cover, it's the same image for a clopfic I read a while ago. It's almost exactly identical.

Well. This story's pacing reminded me of myself in bed. I finished in under 5 minutes. It was fun while it lasted, but now I smell of shame.

I'm still giving you an upvote, and adding it to mah favorites. ;)

Just try pacing your stories a little bit better, k?

I don't know why Sweetie got so mad, it's traditional to throw your fillyfriend/wife, just ask Shining Armor.:twilightsmile:

It's very cute, but fast-paced, and pretty short. I'll still give it a like.

Cute BUT WWWAAAYYY to fast paced for my liking

I am sorry that my story is to fast-pace. Please forgive me, :fluttercry: Its only my second story, and I'm still getting the hing of it.

It have potential but you wrote ~1000 words for something that should be minimum twice that... I think you just need some practice add better descriptios of places and all. Good luck with your next one!

4051584 thanks. I'm writing my next story now, but this story is going to be several chapters long. I'm already done with the first chapter if you want to read it. Its called, "Once A Crusader."

I loved it! It made me smile. :rainbowkiss:

I didn't really have a problem with the pacing. I myself have a hard time with it as well. :twilightsheepish:

I really like the way you portrayed Sweetie Belle especially.

I liked it. It's very cute. :twilightsmile:

Hope everyone likes the new re write. :pinkiehappy:

This is really cute, and what's cuter is that you used my favorite ship
You deserve a thumbs up and favourite:pinkiehappy:

Everybody please leave a comment and share your thoughts. :twilightsmile: if there are any grammatical errors please contact me instead of Blossom Lily. Cheers. :pinkiehappy:

Aww...I loved it. :pinkiesmile:

4161730 awwww.... thanks :twilightblush:, but you should really thank my editor. :twilightblush:

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Well, then. I will. :pinkiesmile:

4659954 THANK YOU!!!!!!

4659954 THANK YOU!!!!!!

I'm sorry, but this fanfic was bad.... :ajbemused:

5025650 this story is good I like it if you just gonna hate and not even give your opinion than don't even comment.

I feel this fic was rushed quite a bit, which is a shame as the first part could've been extended into a full chapter and same with the second part.
Having said that, it was still cute :twilightsmile:

Looked up at Button with bloodshot eyes.

Smoke weed everyday.

sweetiemash for life!!!!! so cute :rainbowkiss:

idk why everybody loves this when sweetie belle stalked button which he did not like and kissed him without permission! and i think sweetie belle is a yandere in this story!

edit: this comment is dumb! disregard it!

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