• Member Since 20th Feb, 2014
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Roxanne10


I love creepypastas and dark stories! Best Shippings are PinkieDash, FlutterCord, Fluffle Puff and Queen Chrysalis, and finally, Twilight and King Sombra! Best ponies are Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie!

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Sorry if there are any grammar mistakes, or if it's not that good in detail. I usually have my stories edited, but this story isn't meant to be some long, awesome story. It's just a writer's block story. But, please feel free to point out my mistakes.

This is my story of how Applejack's parents died.
WARNING: this story is based on some of my head cannons, and other head cannons I have found online.

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Comments ( 20 )

This is a cute story and quite good for something wrote as a writers block story. Just one thing:

Big Mac and Applejack nodded, "Yes sir."

Since they are speaking to their father I think it would be better if they called him "papa" as he was referred to throughout the rest of the story. Calling their father sir seems a but too formal for young children.

When Life Gives Ya Apples

You make lemonade.

4329902 no, you make apple juice.:ajsmug:

4329919 No, you make lemonade.

4329921 but, that's with lemons, I said apples. How in the wide, wide world of equestria do you make lemonade with apples?

4329939 Magic. Now make some goddam lemonade.

4329943 I KNEW YOU WERE GONNA SAY "MAGIC!" But, sorry. I cant make lemonade, I have no lemons, only apples.

4329953 Make the apples into lemons with your pornhorn magic and make some goddam lemonade.

4329957 but, I'm not a unicorn, I'm a pegasus.

4329978 DOES IT LOOK LIKE I CARE.

4329983 *starts flying off in the opposite direction*

4331619 good story, very good story indeed.

4336723 why would you make lemonade or apple juice when you could make a blackberry pie. :pinkiecrazy:

4339226 I dont know. You should am Roxanne10 the not me.

Wait? Isn't the cover Applebloom though?

4344142 yes, I just found it online. I thought it was a good cover, because it shows Applebloom getting a apple, and the story is called, When Life Gives Ya Apples. Get it?

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