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........NICE
! I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLIKE IT!!!!
OMG finally website is back WOOO and nice story and fav:P
Not bad. Very good chapter. But you broke the fourth wall a number of times. I recommend avoiding that. Also
Is Sweetie 80 years old? No, she's Eighteen so it's her Eighteenth birthday.
4016878 oh my god I can't stop laughing
I typed it wrong the first time so I used spell check and got it wrong again, golden. You know what though, the first half of this story was written around the same time last night, so I put all the blame on that. 
As for the fourth wall thing, I believe it's only twice right? Even then, I included a fair warning in the description, the fourth wall breaking counts towards the terrible humor.
Thanks for your feedback.
4016894 Always willing to help. And I'll overlook the fourth wall thing.
Oooh!
I'll certainly be looking forward to the possible next chapter.
What the buck did I just read?
I LIKE IT...ANOTHER!
4017941 It could happen...
only on the hub
What in the name to of celestia did I just read
Wow, Just, Wow.
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>3<
Quite saucy of a story. Mind if I have another? :P
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4019513 So true... :D
Due to the unexpected "popularity" for the story, I'll start working on Chapter 2 sometime this week.
4018722 4019513 let's hope I can get the same reaction out of you ponies with this upcoming chapter
4024360 Umm....
''She's a tiny little thing too; her horn wasn't as long as RAIRTY’s, and her tail wasn't as long either.''
Excellent read, much better than a particular Rainbow Dash/Alicorn OC self-insert fantasy posted not long ago. I've noticed that you used a lot of unnecessary capitalizations; forgot to capitalize a few proper nouns; forgot to add spaces after a bunch of ellipses and inconsistent numbering (spelled out and not as well as unnecessarily capitalized spell-outs). I made a list pointing out these things, but I'm not going to post a wall of text.
Anyway, I'd like to see this continue. I could see a chapter where Button Mash and Sweetie Belle go at it with his mom being the voyeur, another where they don't have an audience, one where Rarity seduces Button, then eventually a couple of threesomes, one with Button's mom and one with Rarity, then maybe even a foursome.
Favorited.
Loved it!!!!
4036527 Thanks for the feedback.
Yes, I do tend to mess up with capitalizing. It's something I always seem to do and I have yet to get over it.
As for new chapters though, I hate to disappoint but I'm only releasing one more chapter for this story, which will be Rarity x Button Mash. I'm not finished with it yet so maybe I could add in a little bit of all three near the end. We'll see.
4038604 Take your time with it. Double check as you're writing and maybe triple check when you think you're about done.
SO MUCH
Dat ending doe.
Well, if it's complete, it's complete, just remember to change the status. This has so much potential if you were to keep it going, but it's your story. Excellent job.
4068320 Thanks for reminding me.
Just because I completed it though, doesn't mean I couldn't "potentially" release a bonus chapter. It may or may not ever happen, much like Half Life 3, but if and when it does, there will be shit and there will be storms.
Right now though I just feel like writing something else, other stories with pairings that haven't generally been touched yet, much like this story. Maybe that was the reason it got as popular as it did? I dunno.
I LOVE THIS FIC SOO MUCH!
Ok, let me make this as simple as possible. WHAT. THE. ACTUAL. F*CK????????????????????????
Final chapter? OH COME ON!!!! you can't leave us hanging like that!
The rule of good clopfics is: once you rut one sister at a time, you have to rut both!!!
PLEASE WRITE MOAR!!!!
(I actually really enjoyed this fic. It'd be awesome if there was only one more chapter. :3 )
I could see her excuse now...
"I accidentally fell on his erect cock." 
And they were going to quit being sisters back in the Sisterhooves episode, now it might stick...
Hey author, if I were you I'd get on a new chapter, or your email might become corrupt with 'MOAR' messages!
sewing machine
Just had an idea for a possible side story. Rarity takes Button to the mirror pool and clones him a few times. She would tag the clones of course, give one to her sister and keep the others for herself. Sexy hijinks ensue.
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4092763
O_O
WHAT.
THE.
F#%K!
MORE NOW! Threesome, threesome.
One of the more interesting fics I have seen. I like the 4th wall breaking, and how it doesn't ruin the story, rather, it adds a flair of comedy. Overall, Bravo Good Sir.
I said, I saw you the other night!
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Well, only one thing I can do to endure the rest of this! ENGAGE SOMBRERO!!!!!
*puts on sombrero*
*Sweetie belle walks in on them*
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Nope, Sombrero wasn't enough.
*puts on motorbike helmet atop sombrero*
Okay, this should do it.
You know whats sad?
How a story can have 106 likes, but none of the people who liked it followed the author...
Or a DS with the game pulled out
Time to wait for the reactions.
ALL ABORD THE RAPE TRAIN
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Too big for the comment section, so have a link.
Yes~
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D'oh! I just realized I forgot to indent the first line. Could you fix that?
4463197 Done.
4467478 Cool. Thanks.