So, sequel?

To short to give me a boner

Was way to short, cute and has potential but needs more chapters or at least some form of conclusion.

This was cute. I did enjoy it. It was not, however, worth changing up my color scheme just to read it. I like that you have your thing with the colors, but it's really hard to read without changing up the schemes, at least for people that have a favourite one like myself.

Decent story, but you might get some crap for the colors. Just a little friendly advice from the Harbinger.

Yolo I loved it m9 please more chapters or I uninstall FIMFiction

Yeah, something tells me THAT'S going to turn into a sex-ed lesson real quick. Hooves-on.

I saw the title and description and was like: "Wait, is it? Iiiiiiis it...?"
And then I saw the 'sex' tag and was like: "Yeah, it is!"

"She wants your joystick dude....

LOL

I would mostly skip these kinda stories but I decided to try a filly clop story for shits and giggles and the begging when sweetie tried to be suductive I couldn't stop laughing

As per popular demand, there will be a bonus chapter. But that will be it, unless inspiration hits me. But there will be a bonus chapter to come.

SHE WANTS THE JOYSTICK!

omg yolo

good job over all but you kept misspelling Sweetie Belle. the e at the end of belle is silent.

GAMING EUPHAMISMS GALORE!

You should fix the character tags. Apple Bloom and Scootaloo aren't in it, so the CMC tag should be a Sweetie tag. Also, Button Mash counts as 'other' rather than OC, although his mother is OC.

Ahahahahahaha

no much for foalcon but this was bucking halarious!

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The funny thing is I thought I changed that. Good eye mate

second chapter plz!

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filly flutters in a paper bag.....(nothing is ever going to change the amount of adorableness I just saw)

one does not simply want the joystick

I feel a little dirty reading this, but I'll get over it. You know this kind of reminded me of a Anime that mocked dating sims. Button take option 3...
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Awesome story!!! This needs a sequel about what happens after they're discovered by buttons mom!
4034860 Not for me!

I love it! More, please?

Sweetie Bell

Am I the only one that felt really awkward reading this?

More please.

Please five buttons mums reaction

awkward.............................

Oh, Button. That is one event flag you sould never avoid!

I literally started swearing aloud when I saw colored dialog.

This was...
: What am I reading?
NO LOOK AWAY!

What the celestia did l, just read? I feel sick.

~A very sick Button

Damn. Button gets mad pussy!

LOL! I could just see his mom's face tho! SFF! SFF! (So f*cking funny)(her face)

Ack! uh... (act casual...) hey, ma, how've you been?

another sequel plz

Ok, so where's the next chapter ,where button get's his ass beat by mum ,and is forbidden to see sweetie bell ever againm and they have to go sneaking around to consummate their forbidden love?

4047186 nope.

I tried to read it, but I guess I really don't like Button X Sweetiebelle.

Honestly I enjoyed the story grammar was a bit on the shaky side at the start but never the less good story, I just cant get over the comments hlaf of it is kids screaming "ewww" not reading the desc and the other half is people telling the author "good job" quite frankly I'm loving it

"Muy bien, botón, tómatelo con calma". Button pensó para sí mismo, debatiéndose entre el juego o Sweetie. "Ella quiere tu joystick, amigo... ¿dejas pasar este evento? Pero estoy ganando esta carrera, tal vez no pueda volver a ganarla. Pero si ganas, nunca tendrás la oportunidad de jugar con él". Cariño, así. Así que incluso si gano, pierdo. Pero lo positivo es que si pierdo, podría ganar un premio mejor".

Button...amigo......... ella no solo quiere tu 'joystick' esté es tú Jo**** “quick-time event”!!!¡