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Dayun that was hot

7165353 I've heard of soggy knees before, but leg beard is a new one. I'll have to keep that in mind. Thank you.

7165363 I certainly hope so, and thanks for the favorite

7165353 If you feel the need to drag "hurr durr sjws" into a completely unrelated area with no prompting, I assume you just want to rant and have nothing to add.

That was super hot, I don't suppose we could get more stories that take place in this universe?:twilightsheepish:

7171348 Since the original writer doesn't seem to want to, I just might.

Heh, that was a fitting tribute to the original, and I do hope you end up making more. You really did a good job of capturing the casualness with which things are treated, as well as the consensual nature of it (as unrealistic as that is). Hell, you even kept pace with the original's emphasis on ball play! There were a few grammar errors in it, but subtle ones, and not often enough to really detract from the story. I particularly liked the interaction between Apple Bloom and Milano, as well as the hints of Apple Bloom's upbringing. Even Silver Spoon's tastes helped build the story world, making room for alternative desires without breaking the willfully cheerful story universe. Very nicely done.

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7246058 Thank you very much. I've been playing with the idea of continuing the story a bit further, but have been distracted by other projects.
Also, thanks for the watch and the favorite.

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(Fair warning: I tend to forget why I followed people and then unfollow them.)

I'm liking this. Everyone's happy.

Well, this was just as adorable as the original.
I'd LOVE it if it got some kind of continuation, especially if it was about Scoots meeting Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle for the first time in this 'verse.

8117855 I've given it some thought, but doubt it'll happen any time soon.

7172632
Please do I'd like to see more stories like this

9875570
While I can't promise any sequels to this one, this story https://www.fimfiction.net/story/404742/my-little-orgy-2 is written with the same spirit if you want to give it a shot.
Also thanks for the watch.

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