Deathsia
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Sadly that part is not possible as it is part of this writers universe. read his/her stuff before.
Man, I want to read this, but I dont want to come to an ending of "And they broke up forever."
I love my TwiDash.
Well, damn.
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this sums up my feelings pretty well
Why the hell must everyone take RD's wings away to make a depressing story?
Yes it works. WELL....
But come on! It'd be like blinding Twilight!
Or making AJ a cripple!
Really screwed with my feels on with this one...
I hate you....
At least it was a happy ending.
Overall I liked this story, just like I've liked your previous works. But my god, please get a proof reader. Overall your grammar is okay, but it's obvious that you're counting on Microsoft Word to do all of your spell checking. The number of times that you said "your" when you meant "you're" got very distracting. And every other homonym... Still, a good story overall.
If she hit fluttershy, I might have killed her
Eeh kind of melodramatic for my tastes but I shall read on
Uhh I feel like this story is becoming more ridiculous the more I read, first the wings then the dramatic "she's awake!"but its soooo unexpected
-sigh-
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Alright most of the story I didn't enjoy but I guess ill accept that ending
wow. it was weird, but damn dude, great read on my part, fantastic actually. with a an awsome happy ending!! loved it!!!:
I laughed at the part where she "emptied her sack for a few short minutes"...Is it too much to ask for fanfics to follow the laws of an orgasm?
Well i don't know about some others but I liked this fic
"being at the very bottom makes it all the more worthwhile when you reach the top" -NeonEclipse
happy endings are best endings
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It is possible for a male to have multiple orgasms from what i have read so the term"empties her balls" can still be applied.
Erh ok what ever...
Twice in a matter of miniutes? I don't even.
Wow...needed to think about my feelings on this one! Well overall it's a nice story, the plot is good, the details...can't say i didn't skip some but the ending was really nice, it made up for all the sad stuff that happened before, i liked it overall.
You. Are without a doubt the best writer of pony-fiction ever. Finding an equal balance of flop and romance without being disturbing is a feat few can pull but you pulled it off without a hitch.
I RATE THIS FICTION 5 RAINBOWS
When Trixie showed up I was like
But so glad you could bring her back. A rating is in order
third installment? what are the first and second?
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First: My little pony: Spike's ambition
Second: An apple for a diamond
WHOA! YOU HAVE GOT MY ATTENTION!
It's just the first chapter and already Twilight has done, in my opinion, the worst thing you could do in a relationship. She's on thin ice, I hope for her sake she doesn't mess anything else up.
Too...much...drama.
'-'
;-; omg ;-;
I think you meant minute.
NO! JUST, NO! TWIDASH! NO FLUTTERDASH! Still, have a like.
Nope. I'm done. I don't even want to know anymore. Keep the like, maybe take a fav. I'm finishing this story if it makes me want to hurl.
Few tears formed but none left my eye lids. I hate it when people bring up memories when someone is going to die. That's what tugs at my heartstrings.
Nu bru! That's just too funny! Take this fav, you've earned it, even if somethings were a bit too, eh, fairytale.