• Published 20th Mar 2012
  • 2,069 Views, 35 Comments

Reading Rainbow - Deathsia



Twilight and Rainbow Dash,lovers and best friends,but what is a unicorn to do when conflict arises?

Comments ( 16 )

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Sadly that part is not possible as it is part of this writers universe. read his/her stuff before.

Man, I want to read this, but I dont want to come to an ending of "And they broke up forever."

I love my TwiDash.

Really screwed with my feels on with this one...
I hate you.... :heart::heart::heart::heart:

At least it was a happy ending.

Overall I liked this story, just like I've liked your previous works. But my god, please get a proof reader. Overall your grammar is okay, but it's obvious that you're counting on Microsoft Word to do all of your spell checking. The number of times that you said "your" when you meant "you're" got very distracting. And every other homonym... Still, a good story overall.

Alright most of the story I didn't enjoy but I guess ill accept that ending:coolphoto:

wow. it was weird, but damn dude, great read on my part, fantastic actually. with a an awsome happy ending!! loved it!!!::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::twilightblush::twilightsmile:

Well i don't know about some others but I liked this fic :twilightblush:

"being at the very bottom makes it all the more worthwhile when you reach the top" -NeonEclipse

happy endings are best endings :twilightsmile:

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It is possible for a male to have multiple orgasms from what i have read so the term"empties her balls" can still be applied. :rainbowwild:

Erh ok what ever...:ajsleepy: Twice in a matter of miniutes? I don't even.

Wow...needed to think about my feelings on this one! Well overall it's a nice story, the plot is good, the details...can't say i didn't skip some but the ending was really nice, it made up for all the sad stuff that happened before, i liked it overall.:twilightsmile:

You. Are without a doubt the best writer of pony-fiction ever. Finding an equal balance of flop and romance without being disturbing is a feat few can pull but you pulled it off without a hitch.

I RATE THIS FICTION 5 RAINBOWS
:rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss: :rainbowkiss:

When Trixie showed up I was like :pinkiecrazy:
But so glad you could bring her back. A rating is in order
:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowkiss::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

third installment? what are the first and second?

MEANWHILE BACK IN CANTERLOT....

“And at two o'clock you have a session with the royal court. After that you need to sign these documents, and then after that...” A regal looking unicorn said as he went on and on with a seemingly mile long list.

Princess Luna looked at the seemingly endless pile of documents with a horrified expression and sighed heavily. “You're going to so get it when you get back here sister! You told me I would get to rule Equestria for a day, but you never mentioned all of this!” Princess Luna remarked in an annoyed tone.

How dare you drop all of this on me! This isn't FAAAAAAIIIIIIIRRRR!

Luna's voice roared at the top of her lungs as the regal looking unicorn continued to name off the seemingly endless list of duties she had to perform....

Nu bru! That's just too funny! Take this fav, you've earned it, even if somethings were a bit too, eh, fairytale.

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