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This was... actually quite good.





Yeah, I suck at constructive critisism.

O...M....F....G....:pinkiegasp:

this is so.....it's just.....no words can describe.....

I love you, man. I love you:moustache:

Here's 50 yays
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at first i was like hmmmmmmmmmmm i might like this story then i was like DAMN I DO LIKE THIS STORY (not clopping like although) then i was like HOLY SHIT when the princess broke the news to spike and fluttershy.


btw can you continue this in a sequl story or just update this one plz i would like to know what happens with the foals.

......That was the most BEAUTIFUL clop/love fic I have ever read. :pinkiesad2: :heart: :heart:
Its just so amazing.... Its hard to find the right way to describe it. :twilightblush:
Tears of joy.. lots of them, and a slow clap are needed :pinkiesmile:
Also as from the non mushy side; DEM CLOP SECTIONS :moustache:
But honestly... One of the BEST stories I read here, thankyou so much for this :pinkiehappy:

This story isn't too bad, though it seems a bit rushed. Don't force the clopping if you can, let it come as naturally as possible. I'll be commenting on every chapter, because this story deserves more attention than it has gotten. :pinkiesmile:

Very well written and beautifully delivered story. With or without the clop this is a fantastic story. I loved every chapter I can't wait to see more work by you.yours sincerely, Shawn Edward Ward :heart::twilightsmile:

this story is so bad... but so good :twilightsmile::rainbowwild::yay::ajsmug:

at first i was thinking it was some goofy porno but it got really good toward the end. bravo! :moustache::yay:

YOU'RE GONNA F*CK ME!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::moustache:

this may be my final straw; i do believe I have earned a one way ticket to pony hell

>> Deathsia thanks, i hear its warm there year round :pinkiecrazy:
but in all seriousness this is a riot and a half

Didn't really enjoy reading this one. It's lacking in detail and story.
It feels more like a prologue than anything else.

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this about sums up my reaction.

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I thought about that, and laughed even harder. I'm getting strange looks now.

That was the most awsome romance story!!!! I rate it five stars:pinkiehappy::fluttershysad::heart::moustache::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:

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See you in my domain!:pinkiecrazy:

“It's always the quite ones.... Spike'

did you mean quiet?

theres one more place you spelled quite instead of quiet but i cant find it now.

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

haha, this story is awesome!

couldn't stop reading and really enjoyed it! :yay:

I actually applauded after I read this. It touched my heart.

to the stallions who have tried and failed where spike just succeeded to them he has but one question:




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:moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

The only thing that could have made that ending funnier was if Celestia had been lying...

This was an amazing story, felt a little bit short but it was very well placed and i loved it congratulations
:yay:+:moustache:=:heart:

Lordzid

this is..... hilarious:rainbowlaugh: "It just kinda looks plain to me:moustache::trollestia:

It was a amazing book! Please make a second :)

words cannot express how much I love this so i will use this instead::rainbowwild:

Freaky-deaky Fluttershy.

“Fluttershy... Maybe you should quite down a little... Other ponies might hear you.” Spike said between grunts.

here is the other quite instead of quiet

Well. That escalated quickly.

I only have one thing to say about the scene where the Mane 6 and Spike start getting it on:

"Can you feel the love tonight"
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Looks like he pop a cherry on an apple.

He checked in but will never checked out.

Comment posted by lunaishot deleted Apr 15th, 2016

God damnit pinkie you physco wizard:pinkiecrazy:

“Yes! Yes! Oh yes! Nearly there! Stronger! Better! Faster! Harder!” Fluttershy shouted between pants and loud moans.

:fluttershbad::moustache:

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