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Majin Syeekoh


We’ve got dents and we’ve got quirks, but it’s our flaws that make us work.

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Watch as Syko, intrepid journalist for Playcolt, rounds up the mane six for the interview that could change Equestria!

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 18 )

:pinkiehappy: Cool story, thumbs up for sure. The ending was kind of meh. Too much going on and a little to random for me...

Syko was an interesting name for him, not many people or ponies would be making deals with a "psycho."

Love the scenes with it going over Rainbows head and Fluttershy going all legal on him.

Majin Syeekoh
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3789678 I'm glad you liked it! The ending was more, 'Let's get an alicorn high on ketamine' than anything else, though. But I'm glad you liked it nonetheless!

Took me awhile to get around to reading it, but it was a really good story and deserves more attention than it got.

Also if I ever write a story where Fluttershy becomes a model again for some reason I'm totally having Angel Bunny be her agent.

Angel would also make an excellent pimp.

In fact, I pimped it to the handful of people who read my blog. So sad that it seems to have slipped through the cracks.

Majin Syeekoh
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3807570 thank you for that! I appreciate that.

I couldnt stop laughing hell this was hilairious but that ending... that killed my mood... all but one line, jajaja when Spit fire asked about jumping and Dash said yes, that was soooo awesome and something i really believe Dash would do :rainbowlaugh: jajaja

I was with you up until that ending. That was just...whaaaaaat?

Also, um..."full frontal" on a pony? That's like...how they look all the time. :rainbowhuh:

Majin Syeekoh
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3868894 "Full Frontal" would mean that their naughty bits were exposed.

3892841 Except...a pony has no naughty bits in front. :ajbemused: The expression DOES NOT WORK when you're dealing with ponies.

Majin Syeekoh
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3892850 Well, when a pony lays on their back and spreads their hindlegs...

Majin Syeekoh
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3892863 You're awfully nitpicky, ya know?

3892870 I am aware of that, yes. And when I point something out, there's always a reason for it. An intelligent person who intends to grow as a writer would take such criticism under consideration.

Majin Syeekoh
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3892880 And I do. Thank you. Next time I write a Playcolt story, I'll use 'full hindquarters' or 'full rear'

Honestly, I didn't mind the use of the phrase "full frontal" in this story, since I read another story that mentioned that, and when I asked the author, their response gave the impression that it was going off the interpretation that the ponies in the show HAVE naughty bits. But they're usually hidden, so that they can go outside without clothes on.

the last chapter was a bit 'chaotic and the show of vinyl and twilight was strange, reminded me of something I saw long ago on TV that I do not remember the name.
very strange but very funny
Good job

what happened to skippy?
and why did he start a war?
P.S. but skippy was the glass?
I'm confused!!

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