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Mad. That's what they call me. They say I'm an ill minded stallion. Why? Just because I wanted a little reprive from some inane babble? Ha! I'm not mad, and I can prove it. Please sit and allow me to tell you my side of the story. You'll understand.
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I loved the tale tell heart story
Pretty epic story, mate!
3607625 many thanks mate
Spelling error in description.
3607696 where?
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3607730 oh. Thanks for pointing that out
3607733
No problem, mate
3607581 I love The Tell-Tale Heart as well, along with Masque of the Red Death and the Black Cat
Do you planning on doing more based off of Poe's stories?
3608418 Perhaps...if the great spirit of Poe himself decides to take over my mind again.
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Did you receive the message I sent you?
3608471 Yes. Yes I did.
I liked it, I rather did.
As soon as I read the title I knew this was a fic I had to read. I love The Tell-Tale Heart and I loved your fic as well. Definitely a more light hearted less complex version of the original. Great job :D
3618333 Yes indeed. It's less complex only because there's no ambiguousness in the relationship of murderer and victim
I cannot upvote this enough, it was fantastic. I'm honestly surprised at how little attention this has gotten.
Work on your formatting a bit though, it kind of felt like a giant wall of text to read and it's not good for the eyes.
3678137 ok, fair enough criticism. And thanks.
I think this is a way of Bronies saying that how they want strangle pinkie
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Mr. Flare
It should be "Pinkie and I". You wouldn't say "After they left, me bathed the twins", would you?
Hands? I thought these were ponies.
Don't get me wrong, other than these two things the story is fine.
Pruzah sul!
3778813 There's an anthro tag
3779645 I must have missed it, sorry.
3779668 honest mistake, no harm done
I enjoyed this, loved it really. Being a reader of many of Poe's pieces and similar. I hope you do one of that one story, The Cask of Amontillado.
3790061 Only when the spirit of Poe himself takes hold of my mind
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4095230 excellent
Wow you're infinitely better than me at writing. Great ponification of a Poe poem by the way.
At least someone whom knows the difference between 'their', 'there', and 'they're'.
You're repeating yourself there. Reword that sentence.
In my experience bakeries usually open at 6am. But whatever. Also, it's worth noting that bakers usually get up at about 3am to begin cooking their sweets. Oh, you're missing 'am' after '7'.
Did He not bring any personal effects with him?
Yes and no. Her special talent is parties, but the bakery is her job.
Pinkie is almost ALWAYS rude
One, you can't do that without a hammer. Two, she'd stink up the place after about a week.
Exactly how much time passed before the cops showed up? They must have been right around the corner.
Why would you give them a tour?
After all that, I can easily see you based this story off of Edgar Allen Poe's "The Tell-Tale Heart".
4826832 Gee, whatever gave you that impression? All sarcasm aside, thank you for pointing out the few errors I had. I'll fix them up in a jiff.
Not a bad Edgar Allen Poe parody. I like it.