Twilight Sparkle is dead.
After getting stabbed through the heart during a trade negotiation with the Griffon Kingdoms, Twilight Sparkle finds herself in the afterlife, where she sees her worst nightmare: Discord. Discord, however, gives her the chance to change her fate, by going back in time and changing events. But will Twilight have to suffer the consequences of her actions? Will the future change for the better, or will Twilight have to go back again to set things right?
(Based on the Star Trek: TNG episode "Tapestry")
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I don't like that moral at all... Twilight was stupid, rushing off and leaving her friends, making different mistakes. She could have easily fixed everything without alienating her friends, or even talking to Celestia. As seen in the wonderfully awesome story Hard Reset You CAN do things and get a good ending. So this whole
Is bullshit! Utter Bullshit and lies!
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I agree with Jirodyne
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Actually dude, I agree with you
I am actually a fan of Hard Reset! but I think you misunderstood me. Also, you are kinda comparing two different things: Hard Reset was a story about Twilight stuck in a time loop, where she had no choice but to change things. This story, however, has Twilight being giving a choice to change things by an external force. I didn't mean that you can't change the past to get a good future, what I meant was that you shouldn't change things unnecessarily or else you'd make things worse!
Though, maybe I just suck at giving messages, which is why I deleted that part.
3834887 Well I can understand that you have to be very careful, especially since as far as you know you only have one shot at this. However, the message she learns at the end basically said that you can never change anything ever, or else it will all be destroyed. That is the message I disagree with.
ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC.
Just added this story to the Star Trek group.
animate this
4034898 i really gotta know if you'll make more of the tapestry stories like this so very good cause i wonder what would what would happen if luna did not get banished by tia & if she was able to save her from herself
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I'd love to... if I were any good at animating
Though, an animated version of this would be pretty good! But even someone just doing a live reading of this would be good.
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The only downside to doing more stories like this would be that it'd get repetitive. Although, this doesn't rule out the possibility of that happening, so don't lose hope
4052789 you could ask an mlp fan on you tube did you ever see Button's Adventures on youtbe by JanAnimations: Animator
Lovely concept, but unfortunately, the execution could have been better. I don't want to discourage you or anything, but there were some things that needed work. The story felt rushed, with too little details and everything moving much too quickly. You also skipped over the details of what Twilight did after she "fixed" what she did at the invasion. Those details probably could have helped with the point. On the other hand, the grammar was excellent and the idea is very interesting, so keep up the good work!
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No, I'm not discouraged. Thank you for the comment, I appreciate it!
4903075 No problem! I hope I could help.
Your story has been reviewed by the PCaRG
Here is your review, and I hope you find it helpful!
Do note, that I gave your story a like.
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You act like I'm going to murder you for the review for something! Don't worry, I don't kill people
muchor delete comments.To be honest, I wasn't expecting this.
Gave a dislike. The entire thing felt rushed, very little was explained, and what little was explained didn't sit well with me. Nice enough concept, didn't like the presentation.
I dare you to write a fimfic based on The Butterfly Effect!!