• Member Since 17th Oct, 2013
  • offline last seen May 16th, 2019

Joyous Apple

I enjoy writing. Getting an idea and typing it out is great. I write for me. Getting followers are just perks.


Memory. I don't have any. All I know about my past is what this pony named Twilight is telling me. Apparently my name is Rainbow dash, and that's all I understand. Everything else is either too confusing or she won't tell me. Every time I do something in front of her, she just looks at me disappointed. Should I be worried? What am I doing wrong? I can't help but feel, I'm not who I was. I just want to make everything the way they say it was again, but, how?

Advice and editing by Golden Skies. You can find his stories HERE

Special thanks to Florarena Crimsonflame for the cover art.

P.S. I changed my name, so I was once shyguyp1nki3p13.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 45 )

Dude nice pic and nice story.:pinkiesmile: Next time cap the I's though

I'm interested to see how this turns out...

i give this 10 out of 10 celestias :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

Woah. Lots if quick cements. 3458151 will do. Too used to word. Picture took time to make. Many headaches over simple things. Glad you like it though

this is going to be interesting, i think i'm going to follow this :trixieshiftright:

I want to know what happened to her.

Nice story, but the grammar could use some work. Here's my card.

firebirdabirdmadeoutoffire, mighty editorâ„¢
I edit stories that have short chapters. Comes in copy and paste-able form.

3460612 you will soon find out>>3460699 thanks for the offer, but I already have an editor. I didn't ask for help on this one because he was busy at the time, also, I just wanted to see what I could do without an editor. Only me working on it. But I guess, since that so many views already, I'll ask for his edits.


I felt a disturbance in the written word. Is my presence needed? :pinkiehappy:

3461629 It would be appreciated.


To Google Docs... I ride! :yay::yay::yay:

16 favs, 13 likes. :ajbemused:

Please please please continue

i am almost done with the second chapter, i just need to have my editor look at it.
and proof reader

25 favs: 18 likes

really :facehoof:

:pinkiegasp:, sorry, i forgot to have you read it, i was half asleep, and forgot completely about you when just trying to get it finished edited, that i published it. :facehoof:

i got 200 views :raritydespair:
this is so awesome:rainbowkiss:



I have the same problem on my stories. This is sort of how I imagine the conversations going between me and the people who favorite the story:

(Them) Oh my gosh! Your story is in my favorites of all time! I'll track it and everything!

(Me) So why haven't you liked the story then?

(Them) Well your story is great and all, but I don't like it.

(Me) :rainbowhuh:

(Them) :trollestia:

It's a conspiracy I tell you.

:pinkiegasp: I love you story so much:rainbowkiss:

Why thank you good sir:moustache:

I will try and get back on the role, after all of my testing, i have been brain dead:raritycry:.
but now i am working on my draft again:rainbowdetermined2:

Congrats, your story has been reviewed! And wiss a twist!:twistnerd:
This awesome link right here!

Love the new chapter keep it coming, so umm no Twidash? :rainbowkiss:

Interesting so far, but the spelling errors are distracting.

Interesting concept, but the spelling ruined it for me.

5345981 may I ask where these errors are? It's not exactly easy to self edit.

Whoa! This is a great one. I really wanna know what happenned to Rainbow? And who's that stallion? I feel Twilight is a little bit mad or something at Rainbow. I think she might be more care about her.
So, when will you update again? I hope you will soon. :)))

Dayum! That chapter was such a tease... Ya could have added much more to it, but naw, you gotta go leaving me hanging!!!:twilightangry2:

Did I miss something? Who the hell is Sliver?

5487684 You didn't miss anything. That was on purpose.

5477796 I know how you feel. XD I did that on purpose.

So, uh, gonna finish or... 'Cause I think it's worth the read though you should also try fixing some things like the text alignment. I think I speak for everyone when I say that we prefer Justified rather than Center.

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOONNN!! XP This is very interesting!!!!XP

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