Derpy had a hard day. She tries to cheer up by herself but a pony ends up helping.
P.S. This is my first story that I posted. It's something I came up to help break a writers block.
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Joyous Apple
I enjoy writing. Getting an idea and typing it out is great. I write for me. Getting followers are just perks.
Joyous Apple
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I'll be your friend Derpy...
What ?
no.....
No they're my muffins!!!
3395343 lol
3395373
*Sitting on the ground with a swelled white eye*
Sniff
It's not funny.....
I like it. Hell, I'll hit that like button. Its a good story. A little work is needed. But I can't be a fucking critic. I'm no better either. Plus you make the story right for everyone. Unlike me, I can't help but add foul language. Its just how I'm raised in this fucked up world. You followed me and I like your stories so.....fuck it, I'll follow you.
Also I would like to know something. Where did you get your inspiration from? What made you wanna make a story like this?
3409396i got it from reading up on Derpy and peoples stories. I got ideas from them all. I felt sorry for the pony and decided to act on it. I put self in the story to help her. I mean really, who doesn't like to see Derpy smile. I have another story with Derpy in mind.
3409465 I will definitely check it out. I love to see that pony smile. You've told me your inspiration. How about mine? Well, lets just say home. Home is a place where many people feel comfortable, safe, relaxed, and happy. Many people. But what about the few people who don't feel any of those things? I'm unfortunately one of the few. So give me a good weeks worth of my life and I'll give you a good story. Oh nothing happy. Just good. I'm probably bad with judging people. Please don't get offended.
What I mean is your story seems to speak some past. Your past. I know I'm being an annoying little fucker but......never mind. Just...forget it. I'm going to deep. I'm wasting your time and everyone else's. I just like to talk to people. Don't get that enough around my place. Sorry for the waste of your time. But I'll definitely look at your other story.
3409662it is most deffinately not a waste. I'm still pondering on how you figured some of that shit out. Well, that's a first. My 1st time cussing on fimfiction.
3409678 I guess its just a gift. Or a curse. Would you mind if I...I mean if its okay with you. Could I PM you?
3409716 sure, I'll try to stay awake. But sorry if I don't respond. I feel like crap and am tired. 11:33 pm where I'm at. Need to be up at 5
3409716 but you are always welcome to PM me
Well, this is most certainly an interesting read. I enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what's in store for Derpy and Jacks. :)
3452706 oh, i didn't really think on continuing it.
i guess i could try.
i did a quick draft on a second part to it. but, it seemed to not fall into place well.
I guess i could give it another shot.
3452715 Well, if you do decide to continue the story, i will certainly keep reading.
3452732 guess i'll try