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Joyous Apple


I enjoy writing. Getting an idea and typing it out is great. I write for me. Getting followers are just perks.

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Pinkie pie writes a letter to someone that she likes and tells this person how she felt. How she really felt. She has been changed, she knows that, she can never be the same, and dealing with it is hard, but, can she continue to deal with it?

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Comments ( 27 )

This story... it's very good. It's the kind of story that you can look past the spelling or punctuation errors to really love what it is. I can relate to it a lot. Well done.

Sadly, so can i. the spelling errors were just over looked in my writing. i was kind of venting.

You need an editor or a proof reader. There's a group on here to help you with your spelling and grammar.:twilightsmile:

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I have one. but i felt that i didn't need this touched. it explains how i feel. forget the errors. i got my mind out on this. thanks for the offer. i was basically dealing with emotions while writing this.

It's strange. I recently had the idea for a piece of fanfiction, also dealing with Pinkie Pie, about the idea of her being alone. Although, mine was going to have little happier ending.

And, by the way, bravo, my good sir. Bravo.

Trails and tribulations are what we face, still we look forward to a greater grace.:pinkiesad2:

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Oh thats fine! I understand i write to vent my feelings so i know and i did like it. it was sad so good job.:scootangel:

great story i loved :twilightsmile:

gua no hay palabras que expresen lo grandioso de este trabajo

I've never read a FlutterJack before. Never actually heard of it. Now I'm all sad. But that was really beautiful. To me it sounds like a suicide letter...:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:
What have you done, Fluttershy?!?!:fluttershbad::fluttershbad:

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I didn't start it with that intention. But writing turned to flow and the story came out. It is through experience. Some parts are true, and others aren't. This story was transitioned over from a true one.

Oh God the feeeelllss I'm crying right now man

Hmm this story seems interesting....
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*Dislikes; then runs away*

Read it straight away and noticed the parts that seemed real and familiar, all to have my suspicious verified by your note and the comments. Nicely done and I can definitely relate.

This is literally a story about me I act exactly like this afraid to say anything and I fear this is exactly what will happen to me

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This was me. But, I don't think i'm to worried about it anymore. And you know what. i'm going to create a sequel. Yup.

3776328 please do I'm excited I'll be waiting

Quick question was pinkie going to od on the pills to kill herself my friend thinks that I disagree whon is right
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I got the review done! here it is!

I'm fourty-six. At the age of fifteen, a small lifetime ago, I was self-destructive and very depressed. I came close to doing myself in with pills.
I'm obviously okay now, but I can still relate to Pinkamena's crippling emotional pain. LIfe is a lot easier to deal with when you can think clearly, but she's obviously not too good with that right now.
This gets an upvote from me.

I don't need to ask my friend, I just know. I know better than most. I hope it gets better. I wrote my own just like it, so I know. Go ahead and read it if you want, you'll understand it and you might like this story

3963943 I'll take a look at it.

I do like this type of writing in stories, when it's not your traditional story, if you know what I mean. :twilightsheepish: Anyway, I like it, sorry I couldn't be there to proofread it but, I realize that you were venting which is good... yeah I started out with an idea for this comment... now I don't know what to say... Look forward to more! :twilightblush::pinkiesmile:

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