Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, And Scootaloo Fail At Another Cutie Mark Attempt
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really twilight? why would she believe the cmc?
3471313 in this one shes suppose to be like derpy lol
..... no comment....i'm just gonna go back to my hotel pizza...... o.o....
3471681 lol honesly im not surprised this fic i guess was random or somethan lawl
this was so Awesome
cool and awesome! good job
3556710 really this was my worst fic ever but eh thanks
3556719Shit man even I can make this better. And I'm not that good! The story was rusted and their was no time for bonding between the charters. A good story comes in time. I spent 4 Months finding a tittle for my story. You need to tell how Darth-. Darth Vader! ARE YOU FUCKING INSANE?!!!!
2 Out Of 5 Happy Pinkies)
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Of all the fucked up minds yours comes in at 2th place.
Shined,
Slowbro95
heh lol...darth vader and rainbow dash!
100000000000000000000000000/10
3836060 I'm glad u like it but I'm doing a re write soon it was rushed
3836077
hehe
What. Was. That.
I was dealing okay until DARTH VADAR!!!!
what the hell? When it said crossover I was expecting something that would make sense. That didn't make any sense.
I'm sorry, I thought I'd enjoy this, but that last bit ruined it for me
4108142 sorry, I don't mean to be mean, but I just didn't like this.
4108144 yes its my worst story but it gets a rewrite soon
It doesn't make any sense and it was hilarious! Darth vader really? Even through I think its hilarious!! I would place a cool pony smiley, but I guess that doesn't work on iphone..
4441803 i will be making a rewrite of this story when i get time the reason is this story was rushed
4441808 quick response, but it was a nice story, only weird i guess..
4441818 maybe so but i might as well rewrite it lol maybe i can add a backstory on how she and Vader met lol but thx for reminding me on this story
4441838 yeah I'm always awesome like that reminding people of things.. So no problem =D (I really wish I could do pony smileys on my iPhone)
This was a very weird and feeling very disjointed about how some part of this story connect and it very hard to follow what is going with this story because that other than that it was a fun story to read. But just way to random and hard to follow.
4603287 that is why I'm making a remake of this story it was to rushed in my option
WTF DID I JUST READ
4603949 I'll be honest it isn't my best story......
4603995 you could have AT least put on the alternat unveriser tag
4604208 I just did I did not thank the AU tag was necessary at the time
4604285 IT'S FUCKING DARTH VADER HE'S FROM FUCKING STAR WAR YOU HAVE TO PUT THE AU TAG ON BECAUSE IT MAKE NO SENCE TO READ IT IF IT HAS A CHARITER THAT WE DON'T KNOW WILL BE IN IT
4608122 calm down please, lots of peaplo would make this mistake I thought the crosscover tag was well a hint as to what I added
4608209 it needs both tags to make it clear not just one of them
Ouch. You say you had an editor for this?
Anytime you have a new speaker you need a new paragraph, that is the biggest editing mistake I spotted, but it is riff with errors throughout.
I can't even parse this. Is it supposed to be a new sentence starting with Scootaloo, or is it just a random remnant of an abandoned idea?
Buried in the library burning Darth Vader randomness is a nice story gem. I cannot upvote, the editing is just too bad, and if you are going to name your story Scootaloo's father, maybe give him some dialog? Something?
Logic.exe stopped working
darth pinkie, make it happen!
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This was so stupid and funny at the same time.
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I forgot I made this story
11203574
Don't be disappointed. This was hilarious.
oh my goodness, it’s darth Vader from star wars, *gasps*